I am..

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I am the fire I burn all down,
I am the water, I wash all away..
I am the earth; I bear it all,
I give my resource n nurture you all.

I am the wind, I hover all around.
You breathe me in to make life happen..
I spread the fragrance making it pleasant
Don’t rage me up or I’ll bring about a storm.

I am the ether; you live in me.
I am all pervading, I live in all.
I am a volcano, the fire dwells in me
I am a cloud; the spring loves me..

I am the mountain touching the sky,
See the star shine; holding my head up n high.
I am the greens n make it serene.
I am the shadow; I move about with sorrow-
I am the smile; I sit on your face,
I am the tears; I stay in your eyes.
I am the Life; you all live me.
Making you laugh n cry with me.
I am the God;  I live in you all.


This Post/Poem wins the The Perfect Poet Award for week- 43/May, 2011


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26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Emily Jane
    May 09, 2011 @ 23:31:47

    This is beautiful. Sounds like a prayer.


  2. meiro
    May 08, 2011 @ 16:51:48

    Ilove the ending, beautiful piece Olivia.


  3. The Reason You Come
    May 08, 2011 @ 15:12:58

    Your words are empowering! We women are all that and more, as long as we don’t impose limits on ourselves. Well done, girl! 🙂


  4. Tweety
    May 08, 2011 @ 12:43:07

    Oh Olivia this was so beautiful….
    I am God…I live in you all 😀 WoW


  5. Broken Sparkles
    May 07, 2011 @ 10:04:38

    you are the sweetest person around! Keep floating with the water and the wind, with the stars and the moon, to inspire us and bright our days with your smile! I loved the photo show!


  6. Andy
    May 07, 2011 @ 04:04:17

    My dear Olivia,
    You speak for all of us with this one.
    Love your imagery as always. Thanks for sharing.

    Best wishes to you.


  7. TeriC
    May 06, 2011 @ 22:21:01

    Beautiful words and that slide show has the artist in me salivating!!


  8. PinkLady
    May 06, 2011 @ 20:08:20

    “I am the ether; you live in me.
    I am all pervading, I live in all.”

    what a lovely poem, olivia! indeed God is everywhere… if only we pay attention and heed His call… 😉


  9. Marlee-I Mystic
    May 06, 2011 @ 18:44:48

    God is!


  10. upinthecosmos
    May 06, 2011 @ 07:05:44

    Great write, I love the purple too cause it’s my favorite color:-) Stop in & read Decisions


  11. K. McGee
    May 06, 2011 @ 05:34:52

    Perfect ending to a beautiful poem.


  12. Ina
    May 06, 2011 @ 02:35:21

    There is so much balance in this poem. Beautiful. 🙂


  13. Jingle
    May 05, 2011 @ 23:38:50

    confident words.

    you are cool.
    you are you…
    you are true,
    you are fun and divine.


  14. -D
    May 05, 2011 @ 20:35:54

    “I am the God, I live in you” I agree.


  15. seabell
    May 05, 2011 @ 19:21:03

    Really nice flow of ideas and words…


  16. carefreewanderer
    May 05, 2011 @ 18:37:24

    This is very powerful.Words of a confident soul.Beautiful flow of words.Keep it up!


  17. Chimnese
    May 05, 2011 @ 14:02:12

    I am the God; I live in you all.
    that line just brought the who I am into a perfect end.


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