Men Lie, all men lie..
To cover up their imperfections.
Fault; may I say?
When women do so,
They are labeled as loose..!!
Men don’t regret
Even when they may know that they are at a fault!
They present the matter in such a manner,
That the related women regret-
Either, because they feel- it may be due to her;
Or, after once they learn about the reality..

I wish- I had a wand:
That could change the Final verdict,
Could change the situation to Our benefit;
So we no more remain the vulnerable- getting affected the most.



22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. lunawitch15
    Mar 04, 2011 @ 21:53:06

    That was beautiful!


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  3. tasithoughts
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 22:02:28


  4. ~Drew
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 11:09:36

    My dear Olivia, we are not all that way, but do, I must admit, have a reputation as such!


    So proud of your accomplishments in the past 30 days… to write 50,000+ words and face your greatest fears… truly heroic, my dear.



  5. ashbeezone
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 08:06:11

    Very beautiful imagination..
    Take a look on my poetry..


  6. thoughtsnotlost
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 01:10:01

    Well said!!


  7. Sumit Sarkar
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 18:27:13

    Nice poem…
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts… 🙂
    Most men are definitely…i agree…


  8. Scent of my heart
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 02:33:46

    any spare magic wands dear? Nicely said!


  9. Fyodor Lewis
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 00:47:55

    You need to meet some better men Olivia. 😛 But, you’re right, most of us are jerks.


  10. Kavita
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 00:28:35

    Well, I’ve got nothing against men (at least the good ones).. but Ohh… I concur 100%!!! 🙂
    It’s funny how things work in this world… nothing to laugh about though.. Judgmental fools as we are!

    A good honest write, O…


  11. LeiffyV
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 19:52:00

    Wonderful work my dear, you always have a way with words and show the raw passion I have come to expect and enjoy in your offerings. Thank you so much for sharing and I wish I could have hugged you after writing this. I assure you THAT was no lie.


  12. Jingle
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 18:59:26

    some truth are highlighted here.
    beautiful piece.
    Thanks for sharing it with poets rally.


  13. Chinmay Hegde
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 18:27:15

    Everyone lies, and sometimes a lie could save lives! 😉


  14. RiikaInfinityy 마왕
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 16:37:48

    It is time for judgement, everyone knows that.


  15. Anita Wakeham (Aquarius63)
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 15:58:17

    Not all men are bad, I have been with the worst kind and suffered greatly, they suffer their own misgivings no matter how much they deny it, I revel in the fact that they live truly miserable lives. I don’t blame all men for the level of suffering they put me through.

    A well penned poem.



  16. Neha
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 15:57:30

    Oh you resounded most of our feeling 😀


  17. ladynimue
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 12:50:05

    I can imagine so many of us being glad about this !! Agree to the opening para but guess we have got habitual of it ..


  18. deadpoet88
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 10:41:00

    Very deep thoughts you have here. I often feel it is unfair that girls always get blamed for everything, most so when they’ve done nothing. But not all men are that way, I know of many who are good at heart.

    Great poem, a lot to ponder over!


  19. jargnar
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 09:58:25

    hey hey hey unfair 🙂
    oh what the hell 😛


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