Lie

Men Lie, all men lie..
To cover up their imperfections.
Fault; may I say?
When women do so,
They are labeled as loose..!!
Men don’t regret
Even when they may know that they are at a fault!
They present the matter in such a manner,
That the related women regret-
Either, because they feel- it may be due to her;
Or, after once they learn about the reality..

I wish- I had a wand:
That could change the Final verdict,
Could change the situation to Our benefit;
So we no more remain the vulnerable- getting affected the most.

………………………………………………………………………………………….

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22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. lunawitch15
    Mar 04, 2011 @ 21:53:06

    That was beautiful!

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  3. tasithoughts
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 22:02:28

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  4. ~Drew
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 11:09:36

    My dear Olivia, we are not all that way, but do, I must admit, have a reputation as such!

    xoxox

    So proud of your accomplishments in the past 30 days… to write 50,000+ words and face your greatest fears… truly heroic, my dear.

    http://ukeepwalkingforward.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/little-deaths/

    Yours,
    ~Drew

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  5. ashbeezone
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 08:06:11

    Very beautiful imagination..
    Take a look on my poetry..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart

    Reply

  6. thoughtsnotlost
    Dec 04, 2010 @ 01:10:01

    Well said!!

    Reply

  7. Sumit Sarkar
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 18:27:13

    Nice poem…
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts… 🙂
    Most men are definitely…i agree…

    Reply

  8. Scent of my heart
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 02:33:46

    any spare magic wands dear? Nicely said!

    Reply

  9. Fyodor Lewis
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 00:47:55

    You need to meet some better men Olivia. 😛 But, you’re right, most of us are jerks.

    Reply

  10. Kavita
    Dec 03, 2010 @ 00:28:35

    Well, I’ve got nothing against men (at least the good ones).. but Ohh… I concur 100%!!! 🙂
    It’s funny how things work in this world… nothing to laugh about though.. Judgmental fools as we are!

    A good honest write, O…

    Reply

  11. LeiffyV
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 19:52:00

    Wonderful work my dear, you always have a way with words and show the raw passion I have come to expect and enjoy in your offerings. Thank you so much for sharing and I wish I could have hugged you after writing this. I assure you THAT was no lie.

    Reply

  12. Jingle
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 18:59:26

    bravo,
    some truth are highlighted here.
    beautiful piece.
    Thanks for sharing it with poets rally.

    Reply

  13. Chinmay Hegde
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 18:27:15

    Everyone lies, and sometimes a lie could save lives! 😉

    Reply

  14. RiikaInfinityy 마왕
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 16:37:48

    It is time for judgement, everyone knows that.

    Reply

  15. Anita Wakeham (Aquarius63)
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 15:58:17

    Not all men are bad, I have been with the worst kind and suffered greatly, they suffer their own misgivings no matter how much they deny it, I revel in the fact that they live truly miserable lives. I don’t blame all men for the level of suffering they put me through.

    A well penned poem.

    Anita.

    http://anitaspoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/yet-to-be.html

    Reply

  16. Neha
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 15:57:30

    Oh you resounded most of our feeling 😀

    Reply

  17. ladynimue
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 12:50:05

    I can imagine so many of us being glad about this !! Agree to the opening para but guess we have got habitual of it ..

    Reply

  18. deadpoet88
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 10:41:00

    Very deep thoughts you have here. I often feel it is unfair that girls always get blamed for everything, most so when they’ve done nothing. But not all men are that way, I know of many who are good at heart.

    Great poem, a lot to ponder over!

    Reply

  19. jargnar
    Dec 02, 2010 @ 09:58:25

    hey hey hey unfair 🙂
    oh what the hell 😛

    Reply

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