Frozen Fire

~*~*~

The Fog had danced dense-
Making it eerily silent on the way.
The familiarity had severely dipped,
All that had hovered was the wind that was cold.

~*~*~

The trees had stood inaudibly compacted:
As if praying fixated for a Sun.
I had sat incredibly tacit-
In a desperate attempt to create One.

~*~*~

Tears had laid frozen in my eyes,
Wanting me to hold those back..
Urging me not to split anymore:
Instead resolving to give it all back.

~*~*~

Shivers had gripped me
As I collapsed like a log.
Thousand times breaking me-
Like a chisel on the block.

~*~*~

My heart now blazinglyย glows-
In the fire- my mind has raised.
All I need is some prayer;
An Ambition to Ramble un-fazed.

~*~*~

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56 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Caribbean Fool
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 23:43:18

    Wonderful entry as always. I always enjoy reading your work for the imagery and the emotion that is such a big part of your poetry. Thanks for posting!

    crb.

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  2. Leo (Leonnyes)
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 22:25:01

    I like this! Depth in simplicity ๐Ÿ˜€ the last lines strong in each verse, gives another dimension to it!

    My Potluck Poem Is HERE:
    http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/

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  3. megzone
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 20:49:24

    oh my thats a lovely poem olivia dear ๐Ÿ™‚
    and what a beautiful pic to complement it ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Nelly
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 14:47:10

    Ohhh so very deep my dear, i love it

    Reply

  5. diabolik181
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 13:25:09

    Powerful stuff. It’s got a great rhythm to it – I could feel the beat. Very nice work!

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  6. Jingle
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 06:33:12

    support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
    thanks for the contributionโ€ฆ

    here is one of mine:
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/

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  7. Cerridwyn Tiponi
    Oct 06, 2010 @ 00:16:19

    Absolutely beautiful. Great piece!

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  8. Kimberly's Page
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 22:31:42

    Lovely poem, I love the way it flows.

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  9. Punam
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 08:48:35

    Hi Olivia, Thank you for visiting my blog. I am glad I found your lovely poetry blog. This poem has a lot of substance.. frozen fire.. it has a paradox that is so typical of real life. I loved reading it. Frozen tears and shivers.. I guess heart-break feels the same everywhere. ๐Ÿ™‚ I am glad you found the ambition to survive unfazed. Luv, Punam

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  10. joseruypc
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 08:29:21

    I really like poems that make me remember the cold days of my childhood when I used to travel with my family to the mountains in Itatiaia, in the State of Rio de Janeiro/Brazil. Of course, it was not cold like cold there is in the northern hemisphere, but memories don’t really care about this. Thanks for bringing those memories to my mind one more time through this poem of yours. Oh… and thanks for visiting me as well.

    Hugs

    Josรฉ Ruy
    joseruypc.wordpress.com

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    • Olivia
      Oct 05, 2010 @ 09:16:29

      Glad you could walk down your memory lane feeling “cold”.. ๐Ÿ˜€ I too enjoy winters and had that in my mind to draw metaphors.

      Thanks for stopping by..
      xox

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  11. Shashi
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 07:19:49

    Olivia, its very powerful and raw emotions. I loved reading it.
    Thanks
    เฅ เคจเคฎเคƒ เคถเคฟเคตเคพเคฏ
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/

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  12. dasuntoucha
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 06:33:54

    Picturesque lines that ooze emotion…felt indeed.

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  13. keymomentsmom
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 06:23:48

    love the flow…thanks for stopping by my site earlier…nice to meet ya!

    Reply

  14. mairmusic
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 06:20:23

    A nice juxtaposition between freezing and desire– well done.

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  15. liv2write2day
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 04:12:34

    I’m adding this to my list of today’s poems that want to be revisited. Nice.
    Victoria

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  16. likewine
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 04:01:50

    love it. And thank you for visiting mine and commenting. This is beautiful indeed.

    Reply

  17. buttercup600
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 03:13:43

    I also had goosebumps reading this…wonderful imagery with poetic stirring words so well crafted my dear girlfried!! Happy to this linked in ๐Ÿ˜‰ Mwah xx

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  18. tasithoughts
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 01:55:19

    Beautifully haunting…..

    JP

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  19. dan
    Oct 05, 2010 @ 00:43:17

    Great imagery and yet leaves much more to the imagination. Thanks for sharing.

    Reply

  20. thoughtsnotlost
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 21:57:12

    Wow, great job friend. This is a poem that I think I could get something new out of every time time I read it. Which to me, is yet another mark of how amazing this piece is!

    Reply

  21. RiikaInfinityy ๋งˆ์™•
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 21:28:54

    Amazing ๐Ÿ˜› the blending is simple perfect, love your words<3

    Reply

  22. Gabriela Abalo
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 20:13:45

    Great poem Olivia ๐Ÿ™‚

    Reply

  23. umapoems
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 18:25:41

    All I need is some prayer;
    An Ambition to Ramble un-fazed

    Lovely!and smooth flow

    Reply

  24. Jingle
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 17:34:14

    Thanks for sharing,
    love the artistic feel of your poetry,
    stay fit,
    rock all the way with your lovely poems…

    Reply

  25. Jingle
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 17:33:23

    frozen fire,
    what a beautiful balance…

    your words are fancy and tasty,
    love the way you nail the poem.

    Reply

  26. Luke Prater
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 17:16:02

    Reply

  27. sillyfrogsusan
    Oct 04, 2010 @ 15:36:34

    Gave me chills and goosebumps…
    You rock!

    Reply

  28. Collective Epiphanies
    Sep 23, 2010 @ 10:37:31

    The last line is simply gorgeous. I like the rhyme and imagery, elegant verse. Thank you so much for stopping by. I truly appreciate your time.

    Reply

  29. breanacarrier
    Aug 13, 2010 @ 00:33:41

    this is very good. can’t wait to see what else you post here.

    Reply

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