17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. leah
    Jul 07, 2011 @ 09:21:24

    I love how you use the different colors for your poems…You have my vote.


  2. marousia
    Jul 07, 2011 @ 06:51:04

    Lovely play on words


  3. Kavita
    Jul 07, 2011 @ 02:29:51

    if only we take some time to sit back, relax and chew over, we would learn.. alas, many find it useless, and many don’t find the time… it’s the others that make the most of it!

    Well writ, girl!! Mwaahhzzz


  4. C Rose
    Jul 07, 2011 @ 01:48:46

    Great write Olivia, ‘concluded’ perfectly 😉 ~ Rose


  5. tolbert
    Jul 07, 2011 @ 01:42:11

    Another quality poem Olivia. I like the way this is so concise and yet says so very much. So much goes intot he thinking process to eventually help us understand…Wise words.


  6. Kim Nelson
    Jul 06, 2011 @ 21:15:50

    You’ve identified the process in a lyrical and attractive way. Well done, Olivia!


  7. ladynyo
    Jul 06, 2011 @ 21:13:10

    There is great balance in this short poem. Insight, too!

    Lady Nyo


  8. brian
    Jul 06, 2011 @ 16:06:20

    and that is how you make wise decisiions…very nice…


  9. Jamie Dedes
    Sep 14, 2010 @ 22:15:38

    Another iPoem … a soft-tech one! … and perfectly lovely. Thank you, Olivia. I love the chair by the water in the side bar. Very nice …

    Happy days, dear one. Blog on …


    • Olivia
      Sep 14, 2010 @ 22:47:40

      Thank you Jamiesss Dear..
      Someone had just asked how come I always know the stuff in the right manner- so that little piece of work..

      Happy Blogging- you too gurlie..


  10. deadpoet88
    Sep 13, 2010 @ 14:30:05

    Wonderful poem, your words are very insightful.


  11. tasithoughts
    Sep 13, 2010 @ 07:06:45

    Words flow and the relationship with each word was kept in perfect cadence.

    I have awards for you.


  12. buttercup600
    Sep 13, 2010 @ 05:48:21

    What a wonderful poem…so very true. Not always easy but eventually concluding!! You write so well Olivia!! Hugs my friend xx


  13. Trackback: Happy Sunday | Olivia's Life Instances..

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

My In- Mind Whirls Writes

free counters
%d bloggers like this: