It’s my Turn




Do I know you..? Yes..!! we have met..
When..? We spent our childhood together..
Did we talk..? Yes, about everything and all!!
So why is it that I know you not..?
Wanting to give away all my Love
I had yearned for you and nothing at all..
Knowing my things and about me,
You had detached yourself like I was a worm..!!
My heart had bled and so had my eyes..
I had wobbled around like a limp handicap
Was it my situation or having left alone?
It had taken ages to understand what was more painful..
Here comes around My Dear Friend Destiny-
Bringing US together again, making US see in each others’ face..
I almost hear you confess your Love;
But if I may ask- Do I know you..?

42 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Teresa
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 09:09:14

    So fascinating! I love this play of familiarity without really knowing or is it forgetting… Very captivating. Mine is here.


    • Olivia
      Feb 15, 2011 @ 18:29:14

      I feel I have some connections with him from some other life I must have spent with him- why else would I keep thinking of him so romantically even after all that he has caused to me!!

      Such is Love- I guess!!
      Love xox


  2. Shashi
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 05:54:11

    Ahh!!! Sad.. when that happens… we keep our love fired up in the heart for ages without realizing whether the one and only one person that we love… does know whether we exist or not.. I liked in the simple style of conversation you brought this age old issue out in the open.. I liked reading this one and could relate to it very much…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya


    • Olivia
      Feb 15, 2011 @ 18:27:51

      Thank you Shashi for this heartfelt comment!!
      Was keeping really occupied- all kinda sorted now- missed your presence.. 🙂

      Love xx


  3. louisedouglas
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 02:18:49


  4. Scent of my heart
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 00:47:50

    So very often we thing we know people and on the end we fall short … what’s left? To learn a dear lesson and move on! One day there will be someone we will know! Happy days dear Olivia!


  5. Nanka
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 23:11:47

    Made an interesting read. Makes me wonder about all the twists and turns that life takes to reach its destination!!


  6. Ina
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 21:21:19

    Good poem again! 🙂 You rock!


  7. Dakshi
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 20:34:47

    wonderful words……


  8. WordsWorthMillions
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 18:50:34


  9. Amrita Ghosh
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 16:00:15

    well, sometimes, what we’re looking for is right in our backyards 🙂 good job on this one, Olivia…as a wise man once said…’lovers reside in each other all along’…that’s why some strangers seem so familiar. HVD!


  10. Jessica
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 14:23:15

    I enjoyed this, Olivia. The idea of having known someone yet not really knowing them or they your feelings.


  11. fiveloaf
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 13:57:30

    this wuestion forces us to examine our relationship closely.. great olivia! happy valentines.. here’s mine..


  12. Sam
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 13:22:57

    Beautifully written.


  13. Jingle
    Feb 14, 2011 @ 09:33:32

    lovely wonders.

    love you indeed.


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  16. siubhan
    Sep 27, 2010 @ 22:05:47

    i like your ending here very much 😉


  17. Jeeves
    Sep 25, 2010 @ 19:27:15

    Lovely one


  18. dream8land
    Sep 19, 2010 @ 16:23:56

    I like the idea of personifying Destiny as our friend…I think that it’s our friend but sometimes it makes us believe that it’s our enemy…but we have to accept it as it is with good sides and bad sides too…Very profound though!


    • Olivia
      Sep 19, 2010 @ 16:49:29

      Thanks Liz.. I am glad you liked the idea.. Even though they say we can’t change our Destiny- I strongly believe that we can..!! This is how we do it..

      Loving you around-


  19. frayedges
    Sep 18, 2010 @ 03:01:46

    Lovely. Hope you are well dear. Have a happy weekend!


    • Olivia
      Sep 18, 2010 @ 08:16:28

      Oh yes Dear, I have never been better..
      It never fails to amaze me how some people read me so well- including you.. I’m doing good, waiting for my turn to pounce- grrrr!! LOL..
      Wishing you a fabulous weekend Dear..


  20. buttercup600
    Sep 15, 2010 @ 06:28:35

    Awesome!!!! I will spend more time here when my schedule has tapered down a bit…you are very important me me girlfriend xxx


  21. Jingle
    Sep 15, 2010 @ 02:17:58

    Happy Tuesday!


  22. Jingle
    Sep 15, 2010 @ 02:17:46

    heartfelt piece,

    we can never 100% understand another soul,
    each and everyone of us are different.
    thanks for the lovely piece.


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