I Strike yet again

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I’ve become a thunder- I am lightning..
I roar around; I am far reaching.
It doesn’t matter who I strike;
‘coz whenever I do, I claim all lives..!

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I possess none, all is gone.
Left behind is a numbing pain..!!
I Forgive none, I give it to all-
The Hurt I’ve collected in all my years..

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Bewildered, I have lived alone-
To lead my Life; even otherwise,
I come again all prepared
Entire Universe being my friend!!

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I am Vast, yet- mysterious;
..Look at the new Me.
I now do only what pleases me-
Gaining momentum in scratching away smiles..!!

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34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. poorani
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 12:43:45

    wowowo! exotic writing……Loved your writing and thought so much…..

    Reply

  2. Ms. Queenly
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 10:39:49

    I love the animation and the first stanza made me laugh for some reason. Nice work, O…

    ~MsQ

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  3. A.B. Thomas
    May 31, 2011 @ 20:59:32

    Like a vengeful goddess your words scream and slash to ribbons the very nature of the preconcieved – fanstastic write!

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  4. Caribbean Fool
    May 31, 2011 @ 20:42:30

    You know, I recently got into a discussion with a friend concerning the relative mortality of people struck by lightning. Some internet searching came up with an interesting statistic; 9 out of 10 people struck by lightning survive to tell the story. Great poem, got me thinking about lightning again! Hope all is well,

    crb.

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  5. mindlovemisery
    May 31, 2011 @ 11:07:15

    I love how you became the storm in this, great job!

    Reply

  6. Jingle
    May 31, 2011 @ 01:23:55

    wow.
    another fabulous blow.
    stunning words.

    🙂
    😉

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  7. Jingle
    May 31, 2011 @ 01:23:39

    wow.
    another fabulous blow.
    stunning words.

    🙂

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  8. Lyn
    May 30, 2011 @ 20:07:25

    Living alone..we speak only to ourselves..this probes so deeply..but you always rise!!

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  9. dsnake1
    May 30, 2011 @ 18:26:18

    this poem is so.. alive! 🙂

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  10. Becca Givens
    Feb 23, 2011 @ 13:00:06

    Awesome … poem and image … keep going!! ~becca~

    http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/no-alarms/

    Reply

  11. A.B. Thomas
    Feb 23, 2011 @ 08:09:08

    Fantastic write – and a wee bit scary!

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  12. Ramesh Sood
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 23:15:28

    Indeed a very powerful poem..you did struck my sensibilites out… by gaining momentum and scratching smiles..

    Reply

  13. tasithoughts
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 20:32:07

    Wow! Sounds like a Diva unleashed!

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/02/22/grandmas-voice/

    Reply

  14. trisha
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 17:36:43

    a very powerful poem olivia. a little scary though- hope you are not talking about yourself.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/

    Reply

  15. fiveloaf
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 12:48:37

    your life olivia? great depiction.. my potluck’s here: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/

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  16. Teresa
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 07:43:10

    This is such a wonderful poem. Very thought provoking. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/

    Reply

  17. liv2write2day
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 05:54:47

    The ups and downs of being alone. Nicely expressed Liv.

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  18. David (1MereMortal)
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 04:48:12

    “Gaining momentum in scratching away smiles”

    This is an awesome poem.

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  19. Aleza
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 02:10:27

    Keep gaining momentum, and it will take you where you want to go!

    Reply

  20. Kavita
    Feb 22, 2011 @ 00:28:59

    Ooohh.. I like that, girl!! The positive that emerged from a negative seems even stronger !! Awesome!!
    The last stanza was a killer!!!

    Reply

  21. Jingle
    Feb 21, 2011 @ 23:42:37

    you are brilliant,

    lovely entry, thanks for sharing…

    A++

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  22. bendedspoon
    Feb 21, 2011 @ 18:16:06

    You’re in control! Love it 🙂

    Reply

  23. Jessica
    Feb 21, 2011 @ 14:29:49

    Ah the link works this time – lol!
    Yes, I like the ending too, ‘scratching away smiles’ – great phrase.
    A lot of playful anger here, Olivia.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/

    Reply

  24. buttercup600
    Sep 28, 2010 @ 08:39:57

    I loved the last stanza so much!! You rock girlfriend xxx

    Reply

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