My Life

My Life in Few Short Words-


Fictitious Friends..
False Hopes..
Deadly Betrayals..
Unending Travel..

Chapter- One

Tough Decisions!!
Moving On!!!
Becoming Indifferent!!!!

Chapter- Two

New steps..
Changed situations..
Bitter truths..
Self- realization..

Go to the Chapter- One again
This is bound to continue unless I hit Enlightenment!

28 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Daydreamertoo
    Jun 04, 2011 @ 06:42:01

    Love it!

    Precise and hits the bulls eye. Well said!


  2. Fred
    Jun 02, 2011 @ 21:27:17

    Extremely creative. I do have to admit I tried clicking on the chapter for more. Very well done. Excellent choice of words-with the ones you chose the need for longer phrases or explanation is not needed. Also by using the ones you did they become universal to the reader. Again well done and thanks for sharing:)


    • Olivia
      Jun 03, 2011 @ 09:30:10

      Thank you Fred. That’s very kind of you indeed! I had on purpose wanted to keep it crisp to convey the bitterness..
      many thanks n hugs xxx


  3. claudia
    Jun 02, 2011 @ 15:47:10

    i’m totally with kavita…there’s always a chance to escape those circles…and her epilogue sounds really good…go for it..


  4. Kavita
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 21:25:58

    I’ll give you the epilogue, sweetie…

    REAL friends!

    Love you loads, honey!!!


  5. Henry Clemmons
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 10:45:08

    Ha. You got it going on. Very clever and presented like the master you are. Enjoyed it GREATLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  6. ayala
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 05:47:56

    Sad…things will get better!


  7. Emmanuel Ibok
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 05:14:44

    Wow…this is splendid and creative. Good to see some optimism in chapter 2.



  8. tolbert
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 03:58:20

    You are so right, the path to enlightenment can never be a first step and oftentimes it is a circular path, well beaten by our own shoes until we step off the trail and learn it was there at our feet the entire time…Good work


    • Olivia
      Jun 05, 2011 @ 21:57:42

      you just said it Tolbert!
      Indeed one has to go on and over till he hits enlightenement..

      Thank you for stopping by and appreciating.. hugs xoxox


  9. janice kelly
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 03:38:36

    “my life in a few short words”, olivia, your creativity has no limitations, i love the entire concept of expressing your entire life in a preface and chapters. and how each heading hits on your most profound needs and experiences…always a joy to visit your writing…very talented…



    • Olivia
      Jun 05, 2011 @ 22:01:32

      Thank you Janice!
      You just made me smile wide.. you are quite a gem yourself! I enjoy your music.. that’s the greed that drags me to your site often.. 🙂

      hugs xoxox


  10. Anthony North
    Jun 01, 2011 @ 02:45:29

    Unusual but clever.


  11. trisha
    Oct 16, 2010 @ 16:32:51

    You are a priceless human being olivia. keep shining.


  12. Jingle
    Oct 02, 2010 @ 07:03:50

    check out the doll for you,
    have a laugh.


  13. Jingle
    Oct 02, 2010 @ 07:03:45

    powerful words.


  14. buttercup600
    Oct 01, 2010 @ 05:36:29

    You rock girlfriend xxx


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