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Iron when molten is malleable the most-
Cooling thereafter transforming into Hammer!
Rock however; by softer strokes,
Could be chiseled, into an intricate Figurine.
Gold is crafted only when melted,
Burning which gives it- its signature shine!
A decaying vegetation turns into Coal;
Taking the fossils n dead meat alongwith.
I am all magma, immersed in veracities,
The strokes don’t hurt me anymore-
I am waiting for the design to conclude;
Resting for a while; while I turn into a Diamond.
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Submitted for Magpie Tales
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Carrie Burtt
May 01, 2011 @ 01:43:18
Your words shine like diamonds Olivia! Love this! π
Olivia
May 01, 2011 @ 10:52:27
oooooh! Thank you Carrie.. π
Glad you liked those.. xox
Jingle
Apr 30, 2011 @ 19:26:16
magical sentiments,
wow.
you rock!
π
Olivia
Apr 30, 2011 @ 20:39:14
Thanks!!
Rick
Apr 29, 2011 @ 04:19:23
I love the way you stay true to yourself in this poem, while chaos and change go on all around. A diamond to be sure!
Rick
Olivia
Apr 29, 2011 @ 10:48:20
Thank you Rick! Glad you liked it.. π Hugs x
Kavita
Apr 28, 2011 @ 12:33:58
Woww..powerful, and extremely well written!
Dazzle ahead, sweetie… and rock on… harder than eva’!!!
Olivia
Apr 28, 2011 @ 12:43:56
Yay!!!! I am so happy!!
That’s what Madonna is singing in Substitute for Love.. I am happy reading your comment again! I know Life goes on but without you around something was amiss.. π
Senti I tell you! Thank you so much.. π
Many hugs xoxox
Tumblewords
Apr 28, 2011 @ 09:51:50
A gem, indeed!
Olivia
Apr 28, 2011 @ 14:31:19
Thank you.. π
jinksy
Apr 28, 2011 @ 00:02:17
And all from carbon atoms…
Olivia
Apr 28, 2011 @ 00:08:32
Interesting point!!! π
Anna :o]
Apr 27, 2011 @ 20:39:56
A gem of a take Olivia!
Anna :o]
Olivia
Apr 27, 2011 @ 21:39:07
Thank you Anna!! You are a gem.. π
Hugs xox
Rene Foran
Apr 27, 2011 @ 04:02:22
with each polish
a brighter soul π
Olivia
Apr 27, 2011 @ 18:27:58
oh yeah! You said it pretty much.. π xox
Steve Isaak
Apr 26, 2011 @ 21:49:29
Brainy, engaging, “personal” piece – excellent.
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 22:59:35
Thanks Steve!!!! π
signed .............bkm
Apr 26, 2011 @ 20:57:24
the transition to Diamond…the constant movement and change of life that transforms it into something beautiful…bkm
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 23:01:06
Oh yes! severe the austerities, sweeter are the fruits!! In this case most beautiful! xx
Helen
Apr 26, 2011 @ 20:33:36
I love the force of your Magpie … all positive and shiny.
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 23:01:35
Thank you Helen! Your words themselves are so positive n glowing warm!!
Lyn
Apr 26, 2011 @ 17:51:51
Brilliant..I guess we are all becoming something precious!
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 17:54:42
Yes.. with time we all do become so!! xxx
Reflections
Apr 26, 2011 @ 08:45:11
Gorgeous reflections of the gemstones, minerals turned to a fabulous shine.
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 10:29:19
Thanks Petrina! Much appreciated.. xx
DebbyMcC
Apr 26, 2011 @ 04:54:38
“Resting for a while; while I turn into a Diamond.” Yes! Very nice.
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 10:32:52
Thank you Debby!! Glad you liked it.. xx
Kristen Haskell
Apr 26, 2011 @ 03:55:10
Another blogger after my own heart! I do love the gems and all that glitters!
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 10:36:02
Quite likewise! Come to think of it, which woman doesn’t love the glittering part? π
thingy
Apr 25, 2011 @ 23:55:49
Gorgeous! Love it. : )
Olivia
Apr 26, 2011 @ 02:13:19
Thank you!!
hugs xox
Anthony North
Apr 25, 2011 @ 19:59:46
A gem of a post.
Olivia
Apr 25, 2011 @ 21:35:29
geeee! Thanks North.. grinning big.. π
Andy
Apr 25, 2011 @ 19:32:30
There’s always that one diamond that sparkles and shines above all others and then becomes the most precious, as you are.
Another fine diamond in the making. Nicely done.
Olivia
Apr 25, 2011 @ 21:36:59
Man!!
You are so supporting!! Always there to read and comment…errr… compliment i.e.,
Thank you Andy for your love n support!!
Many Sparkling Hugs xox
honeyhaiku
Apr 25, 2011 @ 19:30:56
Wow, what a transformation, awaits you! This is clever and poignant.
Olivia
Apr 25, 2011 @ 21:37:51
Thank you Nicole!! Glad you liked it!!
Many Hugs xoxox
Lisa
Apr 25, 2011 @ 19:20:48
Gorgeous picture and wonderful post. I enjoyed them both.
Lisa
InspiredbyLisa
Olivia
Apr 25, 2011 @ 21:38:18
Thanks Lisa!! Much Love.. π
xoxox
mairmusic
Oct 20, 2010 @ 09:23:04
Interesting point of view!
Olivia
Oct 20, 2010 @ 10:12:34
hehe.. Thankyou Marilynn!! π xx
trisha
Oct 15, 2010 @ 17:00:16
you are awesome olivia, so are your poems. You are a very talented person.
all the best my dear friend.
lots of love.
Olivia
Oct 15, 2010 @ 18:28:00
Hey Trisha.. I am so blessed to have you around.. The very in everything to you too.. π Love- xox
Jingle
Oct 10, 2010 @ 03:30:34
u r a diamond,
shine what ever you can.
fabulous poem!
Olivia
Oct 15, 2010 @ 22:50:41
Thanks Ji.. your words are precious.. π