“For you- My Him..”

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I dreamt of Him again.. (sigh)
Him holding Me close.. (alas)
I leaning, against Him.. (..)
Him holding me tight.. (I wish)

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Sweet little memories of Him are back..!!
(Haunting me), Making me Blush yet again.
Him has failed Me just too often..
(But) for Now, all I have in my mind- is Him.

(Hopeless..!!)

..

Afternote: Love is not my forte- I had only groaned!! I didn’t know that a dream would make me write this..

Related Post- I dream of Him..

Some more dedicated to HIM-

HIM is very much around

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Submitted for Friday Flash 55

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    81 Comments (+add yours?)

    1. Kavita
      Mar 12, 2011 @ 15:38:10

      (Umm) The Him of my life haunts me any which way… (sigh)
      But that’s the one thing I don’t mind (yaayyy)
      The lesser Hims may rest (wwhhheeww) 🙂

      Gee… After waking up, you wrote so beautifully… I am just wondering what if you could sleep-write!! 🙂

      Bless ya, gal!!!
      Dream good… but dream on.. eventually, those dreams will get better (fingers crossed)

      Till then, here:
      xoxooxox

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Mar 12, 2011 @ 15:45:58

        One darn good Kavita I have with me 😉

        I too feel I should sleep- write. Often I get dreams that help me write. This is nothing new. I learnt a few song lyrics in this way.. !! People would not believe me- that’s when I decided it’s time I write all about how it has been with me..

        Only this morning I dreamt of pigeon n there was one in my hand- a white one.. of course I didn’t grub him. I would say it was him (and not HIM) because it swelled beneath its beak.. squawk!!

        Thank you for all your love n wishes.. It means world to me! I have really lost count how much I owe you- but then.. do I? hehehehe

        mwaaaaah xoxox

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    2. PattiKen
      Mar 12, 2011 @ 10:29:40

      The “Him”s of our lives have a way of moving into our minds forever.

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    3. Steve Isaak
      Mar 12, 2011 @ 05:28:31

      Amusing (in a good way), effective piece.

      Reply

    4. dustus
      Mar 12, 2011 @ 04:10:36

      Like the song-like quality that almost makes the Him a Hymn. The interjections in parenthesis add personality to the lyrics. Very nicely done.

      Reply

    5. Alice Audrey
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 22:32:08

      Aint love grand? It’ll certainly mess with your dreams, at any rate.

      Reply

    6. Eric 'Bubba' Alder
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 21:20:54

      Uh-oh! You’ve spilled our little secret… now everybody will know you were dreaming about me!

      (Yeah, right… having nightmares! LOL!)

      Nice 55, Olivia!

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      • Olivia
        Mar 11, 2011 @ 22:37:55

        lolsss

        Eric, aren’t you cute? hahahaha I really don’t think dreaming of you would be nightmarish 😉
        Thanks for the laugh!
        Hugs xx

        Reply

    7. brian
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 18:16:55

      smiles. sounds like Him has quite the gravity….very romantic eh?

      Reply

    8. G-Man
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 17:53:16

      Olivia….
      Your longing and dreaming is so Romantic.
      I feel your emotion.
      Excellent 55 My Friend.
      Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

      Reply

    9. ladynimue
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 17:20:31

      Happens so often !
      Well written 🙂

      Reply

    10. Belinda
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 16:20:21

      I can feel the push and pull of Him here. Cheers.

      Reply

    11. Anthony North
      Mar 11, 2011 @ 14:13:05

      An excellent write. Great romance.

      Reply

    12. Phoenix Rising - An ode to new beginnings
      Oct 29, 2010 @ 20:38:02

      Firstly, thanks for the invite and the gracious comments. 🙂
      I love this piece! The contradictions are beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. I too dream of my Him as that’s the only way I know to truly have Him 😉 Here’s to all the ‘Him’ s that inspire poignant pieces! And here’s to you for a wonderful read!

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 31, 2010 @ 14:47:56

        Such beautiful feelings that’s conveyed through your words.. Thanks a very big bunch.. 🙂
        Oh yeah- these “HIMs” hardly have any idea what’s going around- but nevermind that- maybe that’s how it works- I crib about Him and they all praise- LOLss
        I am eager to see you link and participate.. Loads of Love My Dear- xox

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    13. michaelo
      Oct 28, 2010 @ 00:01:10

      What is sweeter than dreams to occupy one’s thoughts? Thank you for inviting me, Olivia.

      Reply

    14. lovelyannie79
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 23:20:09

      Ah…It is the dream realm that surprises us the most…I love the concept of writing about “capital” H him…adds a archetypal feel to this man/relationship/experience….
      First CG Jung created the Demon Lover Archetype

      Then
      Olivia brought to light the dynamic Him archetype!! (you will go down in archetypal,depth psychology history…)

      I look foward to reading more Him poems…i already relate based upon some of my life experiences…and dreams

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 26, 2010 @ 23:33:55

        Lovely Annie-
        I am surprised- really.. * Blush *
        I love occult- if that has anything to do with it- if you look at the tags- his complete name beginning with “Him” is also included!! Again, I am super- flattered Annie!! And definitely I like to research, dig, carve and so on.. since you do a lot of mind- reading, I guess you I have to say- you are very good at it..
        I have hardly started writing and here I have some of the mind- blowing compliments.. 🙂 xxx

        I have also included some dreams in the same blog too..

        Reply

    15. Leo (Leonnyes)
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 23:16:25

      very romantic piece Olly.. where is Him now? near yet far or something?

      My Potluck Is Here

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 26, 2010 @ 23:35:25

        Him is no where around- he floated away each time we hit each other!! Nevermind that.. I should be charging him since he is popular because of Me.. 🙂

        Reply

    16. Talon
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 09:29:30

      I can’t help reading this and thinking the dream version is a much better one than the real one.

      There was a lightness here that I really enjoyed, Olivia.

      Reply

    17. tracyhsays
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 08:52:14

      Sorry it was only a dream, but happy you wrote a lovely poem. Him would surely be a lucky Him. 🙂

      Reply

    18. Jamie Dedes
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 07:52:58

      The contradictions are interesting and real. Good job, Olivia.

      Reply

    19. Teresa
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 01:50:02

      What a lovely sweet memory. I think it’s awesome that a dream helped you with this poem. I admit I was dreading this topic as well!

      Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/missouri-1907/

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      • Olivia
        Oct 26, 2010 @ 14:10:51

        Hi Teresa Darling!!
        LOLsss at this age I still dread writing about Love- LOLsss
        Had it been not because of this dream, I would have been zapped- obviously!! 😀 Loads of Love xx

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    20. wiserskydiver
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 01:40:50

      best part of loving someone is even when they are gone from our lives or something their memories can bring us happiness again 😀
      Cheers!!!
      my pots 😀
      http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/09/01/temple-of-my-prayers/
      http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/08/23/shes-not-yet-opened-her-eyes/
      http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/intelligent-light-in-a-fools-life/

      Reply

    21. signed .............bkm
      Oct 26, 2010 @ 00:30:05

      nice how you emphasize Him in each line….relates how important He is…bkm

      Reply

    22. Heart
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 23:27:06

      Ha ha, I like how the angels have their cheeks pressed against each other.. 😉 Funny and dreamy words as usual, Olivia.. !

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 26, 2010 @ 00:19:11

        Thanks Rachana sweets.. BTW, in my dream he had hugged me at my back like the Dracula in the related dream post..!! Loads of Love xx

        Reply

    23. Eric
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 21:13:38

      Better to have a dream than nothing at all. Nice work!

      Reply

    24. mairmusic
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 20:04:13

      Ah, a crush– all the giddiness of love w/out the follow-through, good or bad. You might enjoy the perspective of my 1st entry, not being a love-poem person either. I’m 14 & 17 on the list.

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      • Olivia
        Oct 27, 2010 @ 14:56:19

        That’s one of the most beautiful one that I have read this potluck..
        Very satiny and yet real..
        I am glad you stopped by to put in your words here.. 🙂
        Thankyou Love xoxox

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    25. Panda Wolf
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 19:33:03

      I’ve had plenty of crushes myself, but there’s only one for me now-a-days. Crushes are seeds dear, plant them and see what they’ll grow into.

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      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 19:48:02

        I so agree Dear.. Each time I tried to, “Him” had crushed them himself so lifelessly.. I would love to return the favor someday very soon on my own.. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by- xx

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    26. Ramesh sood
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 19:08:56

      Don’t know.. but some people are much better people in our own world of thoughts.. and nothing wrong in being with their better selves to make life a little happier.. very well written and thoughtout.. wow! A standing ovation to you on this creation..

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      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 19:35:30

        Ramesh ji, It’s an honor to read a comment like yours here and from you!!
        You said it- some people are better in thoughts instead of in our real lives.. HIM happens to be one of them.. It definitely took a very long time to achieve this state of only keeping “his” good things in my mind- glad I did..!!

        Warm wishes.. Thank you so much.. 🙂

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    27. fiveloaf
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 18:59:09

      he must be a blushing flattered pot by now haha!

      Reply

    28. liv2write2day
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 18:52:47

      Don’t you love it when a dream gives you a poem? Sorry about the let downs, though.

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 19:37:05

        Oh yes Victoria- It let me write something whereby I thought it wasn’t my forte- I feel “victorious”.. 🙂
        Thankyou for your words Dear- Love xxx

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    29. A.B. Thomas
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 18:28:36

      Extremely crafty! Glad that a bluebird invaded your dream and left you with a little something that produced such a nice read!

      Reply

    30. Jessicas Japes
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 16:48:59

      Yup, we’ve all been there, haven’t we. It’s only worrying when it lasts and lasts!!!

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      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 16:58:24

        hahaha.. Jess, I am enjoying it- really.. You know why- because I am completely indifferent now.. otherwise his real ugliness would have kept me bothering.. It’s better this way, i am enjoying the brighter side at least.. LOLsss
        Hugs Dear.. xxx

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    31. Sumit Sarkar
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 15:14:26

      Amazing…
      Loved it…I can relate to it..
      In my case though..it’s HER… 🙂

      Reply

    32. RiikaInfinityy 마왕
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 13:26:26

      Special and wonderfully written, perfect read=P Happy Poetry Potluck!^^~

      Reply

    33. Scent of my heart
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 10:11:01

      Happy Potluck Olivia …I already commented here 🙂 but again I loved it!

      Reply

      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 10:17:33

        Blaga Sweetbun, mwaaah..

        Wishing you a very Happy Potluck.. A nice and a warm Morning (given the fact that the winters around) howabout at your end- is it Fall or winters already knocking??

        Loads of Love.. xxx

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    34. LeiffyV
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 09:44:12

      Now this is a sweet poem, I could feel the almost teenage angst and pure love mixed into this piece. I can always count on you to get something out that makes me recall great feelings just like this! Thanks for sharing!

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      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 09:51:45

        Thanks Leiffy.. 🙂 Aah this one went on beyond teenage hit- Infact we didn’t get to hit it then.. I so wish that I get to now.. LOLsss.. Glad you liked it.. Where’s your Link Dear..?

        Loads of Love xxxx

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    35. Jingle
      Oct 25, 2010 @ 09:06:25

      sweet and touching words.
      love him more,
      he is the one you adore…

      awesome job.
      Glad to see you red with love.

      xxx

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      • Olivia
        Oct 25, 2010 @ 09:38:15

        hahaha..
        I am cornered now- amn’t I..? LOLsss.. The truth is far from any thing beautiful.. I just happened to dream of him; I thought why not give it a try! Atleast I’ll make “love- songs” too..

        Yeah.. blushing.. why not? Let me savor the compliments.. I mean I definitely loved him- so what if he may not have- or did he..?

        xxxxx

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        • Jingle
          Mar 11, 2011 @ 21:55:42

          wish you good luck..

          keep dreaming, if your dreams don’t come true, then hope that you find something better to think or dream.

          Happy Friday,

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    36. trisha
      Oct 22, 2010 @ 19:20:21

      a cute poem just like the cherubs.
      dreams are strange affairs. when i was in school a girl used to dream of ravi shastri wooing her like crazy. it was so cute to listen to her.

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      • Olivia
        Oct 22, 2010 @ 20:38:22

        LOLsss..
        Very right- Dreams are so surreal.. moving just in between the reality and almost a reality (virtuality)
        It was definitely a lovely one.. I am still floating.. hehe xx

        Reply

    37. Swaty Jain
      Oct 22, 2010 @ 12:30:34

      your posts are just amazing reading…. what life has taught us so far and much beyond that…

      Reply

    38. Swaty Jain
      Oct 22, 2010 @ 12:28:42

      Your posts are just out of this world, very near to what life has taught us so far and much more to go….

      Reply

    39. Scent of my heart
      Oct 22, 2010 @ 12:08:43

      I hope this Him knows how special you are! Lovely post Olivia dear 🙂 !

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      • Olivia
        Oct 22, 2010 @ 12:27:33

        LOLssss..
        HIM happens to be my 1st crush- almost an affair- always bumping into each other after many years- never really meeting.. 🙂
        I don’t think he would be surprised to note that I write now.. Chances are he would be stoned since I have written about him too!! Let’s see how it shapes up.. 😀

        Thankyou for liking it- xxx

        Reply

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