I Dream..

..

I weep my story- between my sobs..
How do you ever know that I need you..?
As you wipe my tears; I wonder bewildered-
Till how long will I hopelessly dream of you?

..

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61 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Pat Cegan
    Nov 14, 2010 @ 06:01:36

    You say so much so concisely. That is a real art. There is a wonderful Chinese saying: I am sorry I wrote you a long letter. I didn´t have time for a short one. Nice poem and your pictures on your blog are beautiful!

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    • Olivia
      Nov 14, 2010 @ 11:34:04

      Super sweet quote- it speaks volume about the one saying so.. 🙂
      Thank you Dear for appreciating the content.. I am all I am because of you all.. 🙂

      Hugzzz- xx

      Reply

  2. Jamie Dedes
    Nov 10, 2010 @ 07:19:54

    Wow! Fabulous. Now you are giving our dear Amanda some competition.

    Well done.

    Love xox

    Reply

  3. Shea Atkin Tillery
    Nov 10, 2010 @ 04:34:52

    I feel ya, girl! xoxo

    Reply

  4. ladynimue
    Nov 10, 2010 @ 00:04:44

    So many days and nights i have wept and thot the same … sigh !

    Reply

    • Olivia
      Nov 10, 2010 @ 10:59:22

      Wow.. I really did not expect so many responses saying they identify!!
      I try to write how I feel and not fiction- haven’t done one so far. I hope things are now better.. 🙂

      Super Love xoxox

      Reply

  5. belladonna23
    Nov 09, 2010 @ 07:30:10

    sad and sweet. it wont last forever, hon. we’ve all been there sometime or another

    Reply

  6. Jingle
    Nov 07, 2010 @ 05:52:17

    Happy Weekend.
    have fun today.
    xxx

    Reply

  7. industrialarts
    Nov 07, 2010 @ 04:23:28

    to the point but with many different emotional layers of subcontext. great job!

    Reply

  8. dasuntoucha
    Nov 07, 2010 @ 04:13:25

    Short and solemn…can feel the longing in each word you write.

    Reply

  9. Sumit Sarkar
    Nov 07, 2010 @ 02:28:51

    wow…so very touching 🙂

    Reply

  10. RiikaInfinityy 마왕
    Nov 06, 2010 @ 09:52:45

    Short and sweet, you pull out so many emotions within 4 lines, great job!=D

    Reply

  11. Mase Da Rula
    Nov 06, 2010 @ 05:47:41

    absolutely loved this one.. short and full of emotion

    .Mase Da Rula.
    A Ruler’s Kingdom
    http://dieselfromthad.wordpress.com

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  12. Leo (Leonnyes)
    Nov 06, 2010 @ 00:22:56

    short. sweet and makes the point very well..
    good to see u writing.. i thought u were M.I.A 😛

    Reply

  13. Glory
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 16:41:31

    short. sweet. tenderness.

    Reply

  14. LeiffyV
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 10:18:38

    Such sorrow in a small package like this makes me all giddy. I know, I am screwed up in the head but I am a doom kid, what can I say? Thanks for sharing Olivia, I always appreciate reading what you have to write! All the best!

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    • Olivia
      Nov 05, 2010 @ 11:33:44

      I guess we all are little screwed up in our heads- that’s precisely how we write- The ones who aren’t, are the ones aways successful in their relationships or to hide the failures and of course not been able to write as well..!
      Thankyou Leiffy, you are always so sweet in telling me how my lines have been.. Loads of Love My Dear- xoxox

      Reply

  15. Morganna
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 10:14:03

    Great job. Terse and compact but clear.

    Reply

  16. A.B. Thomas
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 10:02:23

    Wow, that’s like a poetic sawed off shotgun – short but deadly. Thanks for the fantastic read!

    Reply

  17. ashbeezone
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 08:22:37

    It’s so cool .. Olivia

    Heyy Take a look at my new Poetry ..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/examination/
    Selected for Jingle Poetry Week 32

    and other creations as well in my BLOG
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/

    Hope you like them for sure !!

    Reply

  18. Shashi
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 07:55:10

    Very emotional and powerful short poetry. I could see the anguish in your dreams and I liked it so much….

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  19. Someone Is Special
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 07:35:26

    This is sweet and I don’t want the hope to fade away…

    Three Knots

    Happy Rally !

    –Someone Is Special–

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  20. The Reason You Come
    Nov 05, 2010 @ 05:27:20

    Like what some of those who commented above already told you, don’t stop dreaming. As long as we have a dream to hold on to, we don’t lose hope. I am touched by your poem, even though it’s bittersweet.

    http://thebeatofmydrum.com/2010/10/28/star-gazing/

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    • Olivia
      Nov 05, 2010 @ 10:02:02

      So sweet of you My Dear!!

      It’s actually very important to dream and then holding on to it. As long as we dream; there’s hope of survival. Very well said. Thanks for posting your link right here.. Loads of love Dear xox

      Reply

  21. Jessicas Japes
    Nov 04, 2010 @ 22:23:53

    Let’s hope the dream never fades, Olivia! I do prefer these short, concise poems – some people whitter on for pages and say nothing. This is tight and packed with feeling. Well done, girl! MWAH!

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    • Olivia
      Nov 04, 2010 @ 22:40:58

      haha Jess..
      Thankyou for appreciating this one- I had to really work hard to say it in short!! Now I guess I am ready to say it in a few words- here- I ROCK….LOLsssss

      Mwah to you too Girlie xox

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  22. Scent of my heart
    Nov 04, 2010 @ 21:55:41

    Nice entry my dear Olivia! xoxox

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  23. thoughtsnotlost
    Nov 04, 2010 @ 21:26:17

    Sweet! As always, well done my friend!

    Reply

  24. Jingle
    Nov 04, 2010 @ 20:15:47

    cute poem,
    so simple words, yet it is powerful message there.
    Cheers.
    Thanks for the support.

    besides visiting participants, you may wish to visit half a dozen fresh poets.
    stay well,
    have a fun day.

    Reply

  25. Kumi
    Nov 04, 2010 @ 19:52:13

    dont cry. hug. love is out there,,, or beside you already

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  26. Jingle
    Nov 03, 2010 @ 20:05:47

    Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
    xxx

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  27. Jingle
    Oct 31, 2010 @ 05:37:46

    keep dreaming,
    so well done,

    smiles.

    Reply

  28. trisha
    Oct 30, 2010 @ 12:04:02

    When we love someone we reach out to him even in our dreams.

    Reply

  29. Punam
    Oct 30, 2010 @ 08:46:18

    How many times do we see our deepest needs happening in dreamss. if only we could turn dreams into reality!!

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    • Olivia
      Oct 31, 2010 @ 14:31:35

      Alas.. @%$@#$#&^
      Yeah we either dream of what we want or what is about to come.. 🙂
      At times we do have the power to turn them into reality.. at other times.. 😦
      Loads of Love My Dear friend.. xox

      Reply

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