Walking Past


With the most seductive smile on your face,

You walk all over Me,


I let you do so!


This has to do with my present state of being. It may not be the most conducive situation to be in; however, that is how it is. I harbor no hatred or remorse; not any more. If at all, My (re) Writing happened in this very period of time. All I now aim for is a couple of recognitions.. πŸ™‚ very big ones at that.. πŸ˜€

After writing the Part- I, the original verse as you read it here; I was tempted to add a few more lines. To preserve the essence of this post, I have done that separately. Since I strongly believe that Words do Create a Whirl to act according to Your Wishes; I have carefully chosen the following words to conclude the flow.


11 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. soulbro*
    Nov 12, 2010 @ 20:59:28

    The biggest acceptance I have heard but could it be about your being with your Soul….hmmmmm?…interesting my Dearest Olivia…good poem(+)
    Dom* πŸ™‚ xo—{–@


    • Olivia
      Nov 13, 2010 @ 15:17:26

      Yeah Dom, this one’s a little tricky.

      I have kind of come to terms with it or maybe still in the process of accepting it completely. Maybe this is my past Karmas wanting to balance. Also, I am keeping in my mind the profit or what I get in turn. So now, I do not wish to complain- I had never actually! Only now I have become vocal and open to discuss without any remorse or grudge.. πŸ™‚

      Oh yes, once I have served my past unbalanced ones, my Soul would be liberated.. πŸ˜€

      Love xx


  3. trisha
    Nov 12, 2010 @ 15:44:33

    very passionate and beautiful olivia.


  4. Punam J R
    Nov 12, 2010 @ 13:31:12



  5. Scent of my heart
    Nov 12, 2010 @ 12:25:47

    Hardly to resist such smiles :)! Have a good day!


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