Mindly Musings



My mind talks to Me-
Just when I am asleep,
Making Me do the things:
Those seemed impossible to achieve!

Miracles, Mirages and Musings;
This is when it translates all of these.
Making Me believe in most of the things,
Those seem inconceivable- out of Dreams!

Intuitions run like feature on a Cinemascope,
Premonitions hit like bullet between my eyes!
Leaving me shocked at the trailer of the events-
Ones; meant to break the pattern created yesterday..

I have thought of the changes that I need-
The possible outcome and the other repercussions,
It’s only a matter of Time and my Will;
Before the Universe would set the whirls on Spin..

My Dear Mind, create yet another Miracle;

I wish to go far, travelling through the timelines-

Never to be stopped, a chain of such events..

Doing all of those; I’ve been dreaming since.


34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Eaton Bennett
    Nov 25, 2010 @ 13:32:55

    The impossibilities we dream… Happy Thanksgiving! :))


  2. Shashi
    Nov 24, 2010 @ 15:06:21

    Its beautiful and how I wish I could also travel through the timelines… would be great…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com


  3. Shail Raghuvanshi
    Nov 24, 2010 @ 13:06:23

    Beautiful poetry Olivia. All of us, at least the dreamy ones like you and me and so many others feel the same..


  4. A.B. Thomas
    Nov 24, 2010 @ 07:11:06

    A hue of dreamt rose coloured glasses to be fleshed out, great write!


  5. Talon
    Nov 24, 2010 @ 03:20:35

    And maybe it’s only heartbeats between the dreams changing to reality. Lovely, Olivia!


  6. The Reason You Come
    Nov 24, 2010 @ 00:15:36

    Oh, you captured the beauty of dreams well! It’s why I love dreaming, and why it almost always gets me off to a good start in the morning. In dreams, we can be anyone we want to be, do anything we want to do!


  7. Sumit Sarkar
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 12:01:28

    A very beautiful read…
    Thank you for sharing 🙂


  8. Jingle
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 09:42:15

    keep dreaming…
    hope you well.
    Happy Tuesday!


  9. Amity
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 07:07:09

    Superb lines Olivia…:-) I so loved every verse you have etched here…I could also relate so much with your words…:-)

    Truly wonderful a poet you are! Good morning!


  10. Teresa
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 04:35:54

    Truly our minds do create miracles when we are in that state between awake and asleep. Hope you find the path to your dreams.

    Mine are here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/21/poetry-potluck/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/20/app


    • Olivia
      Nov 27, 2010 @ 11:57:05

      That’s right Teresa- it does! I have often felt that happening.. 🙂
      It makes you gain that momentum and do it for you..

      Love xxx


  11. liv2write2day
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 03:08:01

    Strong writing and inspiring thoughts. Nice poem for the theme, Olivia


  12. Eric
    Nov 23, 2010 @ 01:09:34

    Our dreams are our minds sorting-out the events of our lives while our bodies are at rest. (Brains never sleep!)


  13. Scent of my heart
    Nov 22, 2010 @ 23:57:02

    Olive, where have you been sweets? Lovely words reading here! May you always have a journey to make you feel beautiful and loved! Hugs!


    • Olivia
      Nov 24, 2010 @ 17:35:05

      Dear Blaga Bubble.. I had gone to attend my friend’s wedding.. It was more like attending a Family Wedding.. 🙂
      Missed you a whole bucket- full.. I am good Sweetheart.. It was lovely.. 🙂
      Mega- Hugs xxxx


  14. Jessicas Japes
    Nov 22, 2010 @ 20:58:28

    A poem of great hope and expectation, Olivia!



  15. Mary Bach
    Nov 22, 2010 @ 20:15:35

    I like the idea that you and your mind create the miracles. Lovely.


  16. fiveloaf
    Nov 22, 2010 @ 20:04:08

    lovely olivia..


  17. trisha
    Nov 20, 2010 @ 19:09:12

    splendid poem olivia. hope it will take you to a journey of great beauty and realization next time. 🙂


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