Revelations n Realizations,
Spun like a giant swirl!
I only crawled through-
Counting the broken cords..

Effervesce in the soda,
Rising to the surface;
Few bigger ones perched at sides,
Eventually bursting before long.

Hold the glass next to your eyes,
Look through the starful of sky within bubbles-
Such has been my Life till now;
Fizzling through the fizz n disappear..

I no longer whine for the lost “possessions”
I know I am destined to own things bigger-
I’m preparing for the Universe to hit Me..
Celebrating my success; praising the very state of my being!


The year 2010 had been one of the best years of my Life till now. It has spelled a major turning point for me in terms of self- realizations and balancing my Karmas. I now stand at the threshold of the New Year- 2011, waiting for bigger spells to strike me.

Wishing you all a very Prosperous and Colorful 2011. Wishing you all a very Happy New Year.. Loads of wishes and prayers for your success xoxox


This Post/Poem wins the The Perfect Poet Award for week- 37/January, 2011.

The Perfect Poet Award- Week- 37, January- 2011


Beautiful stances take the place of the ugly ones,
Completely erasing the the marks and the prints-
Leaving a fragrant freeze around;
To douse me into the ever- growing bliss..


Other Awards

36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. mindlovemisery
    Jun 13, 2011 @ 10:46:51

    I really enjoyed this it had a very unique quality, beautiful job


  2. belladonna23
    Feb 19, 2011 @ 02:14:29

    i loved this… i hope this year brings you everything you want from life


  3. Kevin Lamb
    Jan 26, 2011 @ 02:20:39

    Very existential, ontological.. You have mystifying words..


  4. Dakshi
    Jan 23, 2011 @ 21:07:21

    beautiful poem..
    happy rally my friend…


  5. LeiffyV
    Jan 19, 2011 @ 06:56:39

    Powerful my dear Olivia, it looks as if 2011 will hold some magical moments for you! I look forward to spending some of them reading your great offerings. Thanks so much for sharing and here is to another year together in writing!


  6. Leo (Leonnyes)
    Jan 19, 2011 @ 00:10:00

    very beautiful poetry, Olly 🙂 happy 2011..

    My Poet’s Rally – Myriad Is My Mind


  7. FlicShis
    Jan 18, 2011 @ 22:27:57

    Nice One!


  8. Melissa
    Jan 18, 2011 @ 03:32:28

    Always move ahead and not linger behind. Lovely poem


  9. exitsbyalice
    Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:55:38

    appreciate the clear perspective! thanks!


  10. The Reason You Come
    Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:53:22

    Congratulations on the great self-realizations! 🙂 Your last stanza contains very empowering words:
    “I no longer whine for the lost “possessions”
    I know I am destined to own the bigger ones
    I now prepare for the Universe to hit upon Me
    Celebrating my success; praising the very state of my being!”

    This is so inspirational!


  11. dragonkatet
    Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:18:24

    What a terrific description of fizziness! 🙂 The piece seemed light and bubbly and I liked the uplifting ending.


  12. Life: Between the lines
    Jan 16, 2011 @ 17:46:24

    Very nice, positive thoughts…I enjoy coming here 🙂
    Thank you!


  13. liv2write2day
    Jan 16, 2011 @ 06:14:37

    I love what you did with the imagery of the fizzing bubbles.
    My rally:
    Enjoy your weekend.


  14. cloakedmonk
    Jan 15, 2011 @ 20:19:41

    This business of the universe hitting upon us is pretty awesome!

    Thanks for sharing.


  15. Ina
    Jan 15, 2011 @ 15:56:56

    very possitive embrace of the new year, may it be a very good year for you again!


  16. lovepunaanybad
    Jan 15, 2011 @ 09:51:02

    Powerful! The universe embraces all that we do. Your words speak directly to your own destiny and it is filled with the precious gifts that you have bestowed to each of us through your poetic words.


  17. booguloo
    Jan 15, 2011 @ 02:26:20

    Happy thoughts!


  18. uma.a
    Jan 14, 2011 @ 21:28:01

    Nice..inspiring words..enjoyed it!


  19. ladynimue
    Jan 14, 2011 @ 04:57:16

    wow !! I so much love the last para !! bravo ! amazing inspiring touch to lines 🙂

    God bless you !


  20. Linda
    Jan 14, 2011 @ 04:56:31

    Revelations in realizations…it says it all. How powerful those moments can be.


  21. kolembo
    Jan 13, 2011 @ 23:56:35

    I am pop! lovely


  22. Sam373
    Jan 13, 2011 @ 23:10:32

    I love this. I’ve read it over and over; each time it is new and inspiring. Great work Olivia.


  23. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved
    Jan 13, 2011 @ 20:43:07

    Lovely! I like the “starful of sky within the bubbles” … wonderful! Such an imagination.

    Happy Rally days, dear Olvia. Keep warm and safe…


  24. Jingle
    Jan 13, 2011 @ 19:58:11

    Glad to hear you have a good 2010…

    super delightful imagery and skillful words…
    keep rocking, best wishes for 2011…

    love you 2.


  25. Punam
    Jan 02, 2011 @ 15:25:21

    Lovely!! And I wish u all the luck, Olivia… face them with elan. Happy 2011!!!! Love, Punam


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  27. trisha
    Jan 01, 2011 @ 20:29:25

    What a beauty! your poems are elegant and beautiful like a painting. reading them is extra joy.


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