..
Revelations n Realizations,
Spun like a giant swirl!
I only crawled through-
Counting the broken cords..
Effervesce in the soda,
Rising to the surface;
Few bigger ones perched at sides,
Eventually bursting before long.
Hold the glass next to your eyes,
Look through the starful of sky within bubbles-
Such has been my Life till now;
Fizzling through the fizz n disappear..
I no longer whine for the lost “possessions”
I know I am destined to own things bigger-
I’m preparing for the Universe to hit Me..
Celebrating my success; praising the very state of my being!
..
The year 2010 had been one of the best years of my Life till now. It has spelled a major turning point for me in terms of self- realizations and balancing my Karmas. I now stand at the threshold of the New Year- 2011, waiting for bigger spells to strike me.
Wishing you all a very Prosperous and Colorful 2011. Wishing you all a very Happy New Year.. Loads of wishes and prayers for your success xoxox
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This Post/Poem wins the The Perfect Poet Award for week- 37/January, 2011.
The Perfect Poet Award- Week- 37, January- 2011
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Beautiful stances take the place of the ugly ones,
Completely erasing the the marks and the prints-
Leaving a fragrant freeze around;
To douse me into the ever- growing bliss..
~*~*~
mindlovemisery
Jun 13, 2011 @ 10:46:51
I really enjoyed this it had a very unique quality, beautiful job
Olivia
Jun 13, 2011 @ 21:10:21
woah! Thanks a bunch.. xox
belladonna23
Feb 19, 2011 @ 02:14:29
i loved this… i hope this year brings you everything you want from life
Kevin Lamb
Jan 26, 2011 @ 02:20:39
Very existential, ontological.. You have mystifying words..
Olivia
Feb 03, 2011 @ 19:47:29
You have one hell of a site to yourself!! Couldn’t locate any place to submit comments..
Thank you for stopping by.. 🙂
Dakshi
Jan 23, 2011 @ 21:07:21
beautiful poem..
happy rally my friend…
Olivia
Feb 03, 2011 @ 19:47:58
Thank you and hoping you too enjoyed.. 🙂
LeiffyV
Jan 19, 2011 @ 06:56:39
Powerful my dear Olivia, it looks as if 2011 will hold some magical moments for you! I look forward to spending some of them reading your great offerings. Thanks so much for sharing and here is to another year together in writing!
Olivia
Jan 19, 2011 @ 10:31:52
Oh yeah.. and many more years together in writing.. 🙂
Great offerings..? Blush.. hehe.. Thanks! It’s good to be able to learn about new people and places.. Soon, you’ll see me loitering on your site.. 😉
Love xx
Jingle
Feb 01, 2011 @ 20:56:49
Thanks for taking it.
Happy Tuesday.
😉
Leo (Leonnyes)
Jan 19, 2011 @ 00:10:00
very beautiful poetry, Olly 🙂 happy 2011..
My Poet’s Rally – Myriad Is My Mind
FlicShis
Jan 18, 2011 @ 22:27:57
Nice One!
Melissa
Jan 18, 2011 @ 03:32:28
Always move ahead and not linger behind. Lovely poem
exitsbyalice
Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:55:38
appreciate the clear perspective! thanks!
The Reason You Come
Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:53:22
Congratulations on the great self-realizations! 🙂 Your last stanza contains very empowering words:
“I no longer whine for the lost “possessions”
I know I am destined to own the bigger ones
I now prepare for the Universe to hit upon Me
Celebrating my success; praising the very state of my being!”
This is so inspirational!
dragonkatet
Jan 17, 2011 @ 05:18:24
What a terrific description of fizziness! 🙂 The piece seemed light and bubbly and I liked the uplifting ending.
Life: Between the lines
Jan 16, 2011 @ 17:46:24
Very nice, positive thoughts…I enjoy coming here 🙂
Thank you!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/16/the-best-there-is/
liv2write2day
Jan 16, 2011 @ 06:14:37
I love what you did with the imagery of the fizzing bubbles.
My rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/14/january-in-the-desert-jingles-poetry-rally/
Enjoy your weekend.
cloakedmonk
Jan 15, 2011 @ 20:19:41
This business of the universe hitting upon us is pretty awesome!
Thanks for sharing.
Ina
Jan 15, 2011 @ 15:56:56
very possitive embrace of the new year, may it be a very good year for you again!
lovepunaanybad
Jan 15, 2011 @ 09:51:02
Powerful! The universe embraces all that we do. Your words speak directly to your own destiny and it is filled with the precious gifts that you have bestowed to each of us through your poetic words.
booguloo
Jan 15, 2011 @ 02:26:20
Happy thoughts!
uma.a
Jan 14, 2011 @ 21:28:01
Nice..inspiring words..enjoyed it!
ladynimue
Jan 14, 2011 @ 04:57:16
wow !! I so much love the last para !! bravo ! amazing inspiring touch to lines 🙂
God bless you !
Linda
Jan 14, 2011 @ 04:56:31
Revelations in realizations…it says it all. How powerful those moments can be.
kolembo
Jan 13, 2011 @ 23:56:35
I am pop! lovely
Sam373
Jan 13, 2011 @ 23:10:32
I love this. I’ve read it over and over; each time it is new and inspiring. Great work Olivia.
Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved
Jan 13, 2011 @ 20:43:07
Lovely! I like the “starful of sky within the bubbles” … wonderful! Such an imagination.
Happy Rally days, dear Olvia. Keep warm and safe…
Olivia
Feb 03, 2011 @ 19:50:17
Thank you Dear Sweet Jamie.. 🙂
Your stopping by is always appreciated- I look forward to your visits..!!
Jingle
Jan 13, 2011 @ 19:58:11
Glad to hear you have a good 2010…
super delightful imagery and skillful words…
keep rocking, best wishes for 2011…
love you 2.
🙂
Olivia
Feb 03, 2011 @ 19:49:16
Thank you Ji for your wishes..
Wishing you too a very beautiful 2011
Love xx
Punam
Jan 02, 2011 @ 15:25:21
Lovely!! And I wish u all the luck, Olivia… face them with elan. Happy 2011!!!! Love, Punam
Olivia
Jan 07, 2011 @ 16:42:57
Thank you Dear Punam.. 🙂
Wishing you too a beautiful 2011
Love xox
trisha
Jan 01, 2011 @ 20:29:25
What a beauty! your poems are elegant and beautiful like a painting. reading them is extra joy.
Olivia
Jan 01, 2011 @ 22:20:32
Thank you so much Trisha Dear.. 🙂
You are so generous and supporting.. Thank you again.. xx