I (am) Liv


I am big n can touch the sky,
The horizon lies at my arm’s distance!
My wings sense the clouds-
Their flutter creates the wind!!
The sun shines when I wake up,
The moon comes up when I sing!
The stars are my joys that never end.

I spread my love through Falls n flowing water-
Seasons are my change of whims,
Weathers are my expressions..
I spell the Calamities to announce my judgements-
I rule the entire Eternity around Me!
This Universe has become my home..
I LIV in the ether.


My Blog friends call me “Liv”. Considering what it means n how differently they have pet named me; I am meant to Liv.. Thank you Kavz for naming me Liv xox

34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved
    Jan 28, 2011 @ 16:30:59

    Spirit whispers in this one, Olvia. A well-considered poem. Happy Pot Luck! πŸ™‚


  2. PinkLady
    Jan 27, 2011 @ 18:21:38

    what an impressive piece! you are really living up to your name, liv. πŸ™‚



  3. The Reason You Come
    Jan 27, 2011 @ 11:48:15

    A very positive, confident piece. I like it very much, Liv! πŸ™‚


  4. liv2write2day
    Jan 27, 2011 @ 05:39:57

    Perfect for you. Sometimes (because of my blog’s name) I get a Liv, too. :0)



  5. dasuntoucha
    Jan 26, 2011 @ 13:53:16

    ….This Universe has become my home..
    I LIV in the ether…

    …sounds like a cool place to be.


  6. fiveloaf
    Jan 25, 2011 @ 23:28:11

    liv is awesome! here’s my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/


  7. Jingle
    Jan 25, 2011 @ 20:20:10

    this one truly shines..

    Thanks for linking…


  8. Jessica
    Jan 25, 2011 @ 16:33:42

    Very dreamy, I like the last line about the ether.
    Just found your entry at the end of the list!



  9. Kavita
    Jan 19, 2011 @ 13:50:15

    Oh yea darling!! I love that attitude!! This poem really speaks for you and your very being, Liv!!! Stay thus, my dear…
    Keep rocking!!! And keep liv-ing like a queen!!! πŸ™‚

    Lotsa hugs and love to you, sweetie…
    Ever yours,


    • Olivia
      Jan 19, 2011 @ 15:01:54

      Now this poem becomes worth writing.. πŸ™‚
      Kavz, you have been precious to me.. I wish we were close demographically so I could spend some time with you.. πŸ™‚ Then again- I am loving every moment reading you- at your site and your comments here.. πŸ˜€

      Love xx


  10. trisha
    Jan 10, 2011 @ 18:19:37

    a soothing, dreamy poem. a very beautifully crafted piece. πŸ™‚
    so your pet name is liv, cute name.


    • Olivia
      Jan 10, 2011 @ 21:17:20

      “Officially”, it’s Meena..
      Kavita named me as Liv.. so in blogosphere, I am Liv.. πŸ™‚

      Thank you for your sweet comment!!


  11. Scent of my heart
    Jan 09, 2011 @ 20:11:37

    Great one Liv, keep the writing beautiful as it is!


  12. iBeingMe
    Jan 09, 2011 @ 15:20:42

    beautiful Poem.. Liked it !!


  13. Luke Prater
    Jan 09, 2011 @ 02:48:55

    You are Liv!


  14. Harshika
    Jan 08, 2011 @ 22:09:26

    beautiful poem πŸ™‚


  15. Someone Is Special
    Jan 08, 2011 @ 21:33:10

    Olivia, ‘This universe has become my home.. ” Wow.. So sweet.. I love.. it..

    Someone is Special


  16. soulbro*
    Jan 08, 2011 @ 21:05:33

    This is such a great poem…I am happy that you see this Truth within you….you will always live this Truth…enjoy Love(+)
    soulbro*:) xoxoxo—{–@


  17. Jingle
    Jan 08, 2011 @ 20:56:07

    this is beautiful…

    love the confidence…
    keep smiling…


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