Decimal Identity

A dot is not a “full stop”.
It concludes all that needs to end,
Making a place for the new one to begin.
It is the Period to change over!

Too many of those make it hazy,
Lack of any expresses clarity.
Often it says there’s more that would follow-
This is just the Beginning!

All big objects appear as “specks”-
If you were to travel in space and watch.
The Sun, the Moon, the Stars, the Planets
They all appear as “Dots” from a distance!

An atom is not the last one,
It contains some more “Particles” in it.
We may discover a few more inside those-
A complete Universe within a jot!

“Do you see my point?”

Submitted for Theme Thursday

19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Andy Lang
    Feb 28, 2011 @ 19:11:35

    Terrific post! Loved it!


  2. Elaine Spall
    Feb 26, 2011 @ 00:33:18

    Brilliant. Nuff said!


  3. Nanka
    Feb 25, 2011 @ 21:19:41

    I see your point of view Olivia and you are right!! So much said about just a little pin point 🙂


  4. Karen
    Feb 25, 2011 @ 10:40:37

    I get the point! And it’s wonderful!


  5. Jingle
    Jan 25, 2011 @ 01:45:15

    love this one, super smart metaphor..


    Hello, how is everything,
    Share your poetry with potluck week 19 today.. Thanks..
    Poets Rally Week 38 will be 3 weeks apart from this week…


  6. trisha
    Jan 24, 2011 @ 19:24:07

    very well written olivia.


  7. Life: Between the lines
    Jan 24, 2011 @ 04:53:50

    within a jot…I was waiting within a dot lol, now that was a jolt :p lol
    I read the summary in my mailbox and rushed here to read the rest…totally grabbed my attention 🙂


  8. Uncle Tree
    Jan 23, 2011 @ 16:59:48

    Very cool, Olivia!
    Once again, I love your presentation.
    There has to be something we can’t cut in half.
    Like our soul……!


  9. Someone Is Special
    Jan 23, 2011 @ 15:16:17

    complete poem..

    Someone is Special


  10. Scent of my heart
    Jan 23, 2011 @ 14:47:58

    Lovely! A complete Universe within your words!


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