Hopelessness..

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My day ends no sooner it begins..

I write words-
Read a few more,
But never speak any!

I pretend I am sleeping-
Then get occupied,
With the mundane phase that’s on!

I’m as hopeless-
As one could be,
Desperately needing an opportunity to flee!

I see no escape-
Crying doesn’t help,
Tears dried up years back!

My day ends no sooner it begins.

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Submitted for Theme Thursday

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39 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Anna :o]
    May 18, 2011 @ 16:16:54

    Sad and beautifully done.

    Anna :o]

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  2. brian
    May 17, 2011 @ 19:46:47

    you capture that feeling of hopelessness well olivia and make us feel it through your words…nicely played…

    Reply

  3. Shari Sunday
    May 17, 2011 @ 16:36:01

    Olivia, This is very sad, image and words. I send you best wishes and love.

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  4. Jingle
    May 16, 2011 @ 20:52:00

    smart one,
    love the image and wording, 🙂

    Reply

  5. goldenhairbear10
    May 16, 2011 @ 20:16:07

    It begins very sadly. But it is so amazing.

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  6. Kim Nelson
    May 13, 2011 @ 04:28:51

    This begins so sadly, Olivia, and then overwhelms. Your emotions are in every word.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/12/take-note/

    Reply

  7. Meri of Meri's Musings
    May 12, 2011 @ 23:55:23

    I think when we’re in that place, escape looks like the only answer. It’s hard to sit and wait for the lesson.

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  8. lolamouse
    Mar 04, 2011 @ 06:49:50

    I can feel the hopelessness in your words. The picture is perfect as well.

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  10. ladynimue
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 23:39:38

    I write words-
    Read a few more,
    But never speak any!

    thats the same i am doing off late .. dunno if its the mood or just the phase … sigh !

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  11. Angela
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 22:49:21

    Great work. I can really feel the despair in your words.

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  12. kolembo
    Feb 11, 2011 @ 19:06:01

    Great use of grammer, lifts the poem, the rhythm, very interesting read, real nice.

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  13. mairmusic
    Feb 11, 2011 @ 01:43:34

    one foot in front of the other, my friend. the world is truly beautiful if we can but find the strength to look.

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  14. Kavita
    Feb 11, 2011 @ 01:13:03

    Ouch.. ouch and OUCH! These words spoke volumes, sweetie!
    Let’s lessen this hopelessness, and make life more carefree
    Then there’ll be no reason to wanna flee…

    mwaahhh!!!

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    • Olivia
      Feb 11, 2011 @ 13:49:58

      Thanks Kavz..
      There are still many a things left for me to straighten up! You see the first set of consequences have been meted with; it’s the outcome or the eventuality which unfortunately gets blended with the major issue or maybe bringing me back to square one after all the hard- work is what is killing me.
      I am reaching a point wherein I am deciding that I am done with sitting duck; hoping for the things to turn good. I guess it’s about time I start to flap my wings again to start my fly!

      Once again, I thank yu for being so kind to me- your words make me feel a lot better.. 🙂
      mwaahhh xox

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  15. Rashmi
    Feb 09, 2011 @ 16:37:45

    Wish you a very happy life ahead,Olivia….Hope all your sadness and loneliness will end soon and we get to see you full of happiness…
    Here is mine for potluck
    http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/02/poem47-dream.html
    http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/02/poem46-believe-me.html

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  16. A.B. Thomas
    Feb 09, 2011 @ 08:19:47

    I can relate so well to this, I felt like that at one point in my life – great write

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    • Olivia
      Feb 09, 2011 @ 11:18:01

      🙂 Only that this phase has stretched over 3 years now.. I do feel very strongly that it is bound to change n soon; the holding on becomes majorly difficult!! Love xx

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  17. tasithoughts
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 20:13:59

    Wishing you HOPE!

    JP

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  18. fiveloaf
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 14:52:14

    you are not whirling anymore are you olivia? for a persons day to end before it starts is a nono to me haha! tq for your visit to my blog..

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  19. liv2write2day
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 06:16:00

    My dear Olivia, you and your whirling mind are special to me.

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  20. Scent of my heart
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 01:37:42

    There is always a hope dear, even in the tears dried and disappeared! Lovely Potluck!

    Reply

  21. Jingle
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 01:27:07

    you speak when you must,

    powerful and compact piece.
    well done.

    A++

    🙂

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  22. Ina
    Feb 08, 2011 @ 00:07:38

    hi Olivia, good poem, I hope for less hopelessness for you in the future…

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  23. Joey Polanski
    Feb 07, 2011 @ 06:47:12

    If hopelessness

    Is all we’ve got,

    Then Life’s a mess.

    So let’s hope not.

    Reply

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