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My day ends no sooner it begins..
I write words-
Read a few more,
But never speak any!
I pretend I am sleeping-
Then get occupied,
With the mundane phase that’s on!
I’m as hopeless-
As one could be,
Desperately needing an opportunity to flee!
I see no escape-
Crying doesn’t help,
Tears dried up years back!
My day ends no sooner it begins.
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Submitted for Theme Thursday
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May 18, 2011 @ 16:16:54
Sad and beautifully done.
Anna :o]
May 18, 2011 @ 18:08:54
Thank you so much!
many wishes xoxox
May 17, 2011 @ 19:46:47
you capture that feeling of hopelessness well olivia and make us feel it through your words…nicely played…
May 18, 2011 @ 18:00:47
Thank you so much Brian. I try to write whatever is in my mind or things happening around me.. Your support is so appreciated 🙂
May 17, 2011 @ 16:36:01
Olivia, This is very sad, image and words. I send you best wishes and love.
May 18, 2011 @ 17:58:10
Thank you so much sweetheart.. many hugs for you xoxox
May 16, 2011 @ 20:52:00
smart one,
love the image and wording, 🙂
May 18, 2011 @ 17:57:27
Thank you Ji!!
May 16, 2011 @ 20:16:07
It begins very sadly. But it is so amazing.
May 18, 2011 @ 17:56:48
Thank you! Aren’t you so supportive..? 🙂 xxx
May 13, 2011 @ 04:28:51
This begins so sadly, Olivia, and then overwhelms. Your emotions are in every word.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/12/take-note/
May 13, 2011 @ 13:19:28
Thank you Kim! Indeed that is the pattern of my days. Sending you many Hugs xox
May 12, 2011 @ 23:55:23
I think when we’re in that place, escape looks like the only answer. It’s hard to sit and wait for the lesson.
May 13, 2011 @ 01:05:13
Thank you for understanding Meri.. 🙂
Many Hugs xoxox
Mar 04, 2011 @ 06:49:50
I can feel the hopelessness in your words. The picture is perfect as well.
May 18, 2011 @ 17:51:12
Thank you my Dear xoxox
Feb 15, 2011 @ 23:39:38
I write words-
Read a few more,
But never speak any!
thats the same i am doing off late .. dunno if its the mood or just the phase … sigh !
May 18, 2011 @ 17:52:30
I know this is awfully late in replying!
I hope the mood is switched on now- n the phase gone if it was one..
warm wishes xox
Feb 13, 2011 @ 22:49:21
Great work. I can really feel the despair in your words.
Feb 15, 2011 @ 18:22:04
Prayers, wishes n loads of blessings- any one or all would do for now- send in as much as you can.. 🙂
Hugs xx
Feb 11, 2011 @ 19:06:01
Great use of grammer, lifts the poem, the rhythm, very interesting read, real nice.
Feb 15, 2011 @ 18:20:54
Thank you for your generous comment.. 🙂
Love xox
Feb 11, 2011 @ 01:43:34
one foot in front of the other, my friend. the world is truly beautiful if we can but find the strength to look.
Feb 15, 2011 @ 18:20:10
That’s exactly what I am trying to- and pleading wishes for.. send me some huge buckets of blessing xoxox
Feb 11, 2011 @ 01:13:03
Ouch.. ouch and OUCH! These words spoke volumes, sweetie!
Let’s lessen this hopelessness, and make life more carefree
Then there’ll be no reason to wanna flee…
mwaahhh!!!
Feb 11, 2011 @ 13:49:58
Thanks Kavz..
There are still many a things left for me to straighten up! You see the first set of consequences have been meted with; it’s the outcome or the eventuality which unfortunately gets blended with the major issue or maybe bringing me back to square one after all the hard- work is what is killing me.
I am reaching a point wherein I am deciding that I am done with sitting duck; hoping for the things to turn good. I guess it’s about time I start to flap my wings again to start my fly!
Once again, I thank yu for being so kind to me- your words make me feel a lot better.. 🙂
mwaahhh xox
Feb 09, 2011 @ 16:37:45
Wish you a very happy life ahead,Olivia….Hope all your sadness and loneliness will end soon and we get to see you full of happiness…
Here is mine for potluck
http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/02/poem47-dream.html
http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/02/poem46-believe-me.html
Feb 09, 2011 @ 18:54:27
Thank you for your wishes Rashmi.. blessings m Love 🙂
Feb 09, 2011 @ 08:19:47
I can relate so well to this, I felt like that at one point in my life – great write
Feb 09, 2011 @ 11:18:01
🙂 Only that this phase has stretched over 3 years now.. I do feel very strongly that it is bound to change n soon; the holding on becomes majorly difficult!! Love xx
Feb 08, 2011 @ 20:13:59
Wishing you HOPE!
JP
Feb 08, 2011 @ 14:52:14
you are not whirling anymore are you olivia? for a persons day to end before it starts is a nono to me haha! tq for your visit to my blog..
Feb 08, 2011 @ 06:16:00
My dear Olivia, you and your whirling mind are special to me.
Feb 08, 2011 @ 01:37:42
There is always a hope dear, even in the tears dried and disappeared! Lovely Potluck!
Feb 08, 2011 @ 01:27:07
you speak when you must,
powerful and compact piece.
well done.
A++
🙂
Feb 08, 2011 @ 00:07:38
hi Olivia, good poem, I hope for less hopelessness for you in the future…
Feb 07, 2011 @ 06:47:12
If hopelessness
Is all we’ve got,
Then Life’s a mess.
So let’s hope not.
Feb 07, 2011 @ 10:52:16
I so appreciate your kind words here.. Thank you.. xox