My First Kiss



Cupping my face-
In his hands,
He pressed his wet lips on my neck!
Throwing my head-
Back in ecstasy,
I fantasized-
Of the thing to hit me;

The Vampire then kissed me!

~*~*~

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Submitted for- One Stop Poetry- One Shot Wednesday

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30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. lolamouse
    Mar 12, 2011 @ 21:30:40

    Once bitten, twice shy! Love the anime!

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  2. Eric
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 22:48:34

    Wet and wonderful, Olivia!

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  3. Claudia
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 22:25:43

    sounds it wasn’t too bad…smiles

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  4. dustus
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 21:54:11

    First kiss or first time bitten? lol You set this up very well. The ending came as a surprise. Nicely done, Olivia.

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  5. Anthony North
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 14:24:33

    Ouch! Enjoyed this. Great last line.

    Reply

  6. dasuntoucha
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 11:31:00

    Nice twist.

    Reply

  7. Reggie
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 10:09:26

    Wow!…completely caught me by surprise!!…. a big smile from me….did I say I like this?

    Reply

  8. brian
    Mar 09, 2011 @ 10:05:47

    smiles…welcome to eternal life…with just one kiss…

    Reply

  9. Jamie Dedes
    Mar 07, 2011 @ 07:08:37

    Well done. Chilling surprise. Didn’t expect it. 😀 LOL!

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  10. Scent of my heart
    Mar 07, 2011 @ 02:52:21

    Ah, lovely .. and the end, very unexpected and sweet. I like vampires by the way 🙂

    Reply

  11. Dag Travner
    Mar 06, 2011 @ 21:15:40

    a charming vampire 😉

    Reply

  12. Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
    Mar 06, 2011 @ 04:02:14

    Wow, wow, wow… it was as though the entire scene was unfolding right under my nose… 🙂 Great write…

    Reply

  13. Kavita
    Mar 06, 2011 @ 02:36:08

    Oooohh… that enticing-looking bloodsucker!! They should come with a placard pasted on their foreheads, ya know!!

    Well writ, girl… loved the twist in the end!!

    Reply

  14. ghosterb
    Mar 06, 2011 @ 01:43:01

    Yep…you’ve got to watch out for those Vampires…lol…nicely done my friend!

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  15. iBeingMe
    Mar 06, 2011 @ 00:44:05

    loved it…
    Amazing 🙂

    Reply

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