My Life Song

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A beautiful rhythm-
Untimely prisoned,
Melodious song;
Celebrated Never.

Silent words-
Written eloquently,
Haunting Notes;
Screaming sadness.

Unsolved mystery-
Brightly colored,
Callously disposed;
One Chaotic mess.

Repressed Joys-
Emotions Lost,
Wandering Particle;
In a dust storm.

Wishful thinking-
Pleasant Morning,
Cool Breeze;
Enchanting serene.

Soulful Life-
Pursuing passionately,
A legendary Tale:
In its making..

AMEN

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~*~*~Submitted forΒ Friday Flash 55~*~*~

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34 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Rachel
    Apr 02, 2011 @ 08:43:48

    I often feel like a wandering particle in a dust storm. LOVED the ending. See, there can be happy ones!

    Reply

  3. Jingle
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 22:42:32

    very stunning, your words sing and do wonders themselves,
    Fabulous 55.

    bless your Friday.
    πŸ˜‰

    Reply

  4. Belinda
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 22:00:37

    I’m all for a soulful life and this is a soulful 55.

    Reply

  5. Eric
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 20:11:26

    Repressed joys – ugh! Let them be free!

    Nice 55, Olivia!

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  6. Luke Prater
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 16:31:47

    Amen to that, sister

    Reply

  7. Anthony North
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 13:20:44

    Each line short, but saying so much.

    Reply

  8. Steve Isaak
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 12:46:41

    Love the joyous passion of it. Excellent, as your work often is.

    Reply

  9. KB
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 11:34:51

    Amen indeed!

    Reply

  10. brian
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 10:05:29

    the hard with the soft…you carry a good mix in your life…its not all sunshine but that is ok…rock on olivia!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 02, 2011 @ 02:23:50

      Thanks Brian! I hope the transition is over soon.. I’ll get to see what’s up in store for me!
      Thank you so much for your wishes.. Hugs xx

      Reply

  11. G-Man
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 09:38:17

    Olivia…
    I can tell that lots of thought and work went into this piece of YOU!
    Loved your 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

    Reply

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  13. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 00:24:25

    Amen, gilrie! Loved how you lined the beauties/ the words/ one after another and created a poem! Hugs!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 01, 2011 @ 00:26:58

      geee.. thanks Bubble Beauty!
      The pattern is based on the one I wrote sometime back- Idolized. I don’t know if it has a name. But I love the compact presentation it takes..

      Thank you so much for your wishes..
      Bear Hugs right back at ya girl.
      xox

      Reply

  14. Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
    Mar 31, 2011 @ 20:46:04

    Amen!! πŸ™‚

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  15. booguloo
    Mar 31, 2011 @ 07:39:49

    Well done capturing chaos and it’s moments.

    Reply

  16. ladynimue
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 21:51:09

    You know howe much i feel close to your writings .. to the feelings with which you write .. Love them all dearie !!

    Hugs !!!!

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    • Olivia
      Mar 31, 2011 @ 01:29:36

      Thank you Nimue sweetheart..

      I hope you know how much better it becomes when you are passionate about your own self! Sharing “my mind” perhaps makes it more connecting.. πŸ™‚
      Thank you so much for being so kind.. Some bear hugs back at ya girl.. xxx

      Reply

  17. ayala
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 18:18:24

    Soulful life-Pursuing passionately -I like it .

    Reply

  18. Uncle Tree
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 17:20:09

    Exactly, Olivia! πŸ™‚
    we all have a song to sing – a song that’s all our own.
    Being a particle and all, you should know how to belt it out. Yes?

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    • Olivia
      Mar 30, 2011 @ 17:52:56

      Wow.. UT, it’s an honor to read you here! Coming over right away to read you.. πŸ™‚
      Thank you so much for stopping by.. Hugs x

      Reply

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