My Life Song


A beautiful rhythm-
Untimely prisoned,
Melodious song;
Celebrated Never.

Silent words-
Written eloquently,
Haunting Notes;
Screaming sadness.

Unsolved mystery-
Brightly colored,
Callously disposed;
One Chaotic mess.

Repressed Joys-
Emotions Lost,
Wandering Particle;
In a dust storm.

Wishful thinking-
Pleasant Morning,
Cool Breeze;
Enchanting serene.

Soulful Life-
Pursuing passionately,
A legendary Tale:
In its making..



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~*~*~Submitted forΒ Friday Flash 55~*~*~


34 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Rachel
    Apr 02, 2011 @ 08:43:48

    I often feel like a wandering particle in a dust storm. LOVED the ending. See, there can be happy ones!


  3. Jingle
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 22:42:32

    very stunning, your words sing and do wonders themselves,
    Fabulous 55.

    bless your Friday.


  4. Belinda
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 22:00:37

    I’m all for a soulful life and this is a soulful 55.


  5. Eric
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 20:11:26

    Repressed joys – ugh! Let them be free!

    Nice 55, Olivia!


  6. Luke Prater
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 16:31:47

    Amen to that, sister


  7. Anthony North
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 13:20:44

    Each line short, but saying so much.


  8. Steve Isaak
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 12:46:41

    Love the joyous passion of it. Excellent, as your work often is.


  9. KB
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 11:34:51

    Amen indeed!


  10. brian
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 10:05:29

    the hard with the soft…you carry a good mix in your life…its not all sunshine but that is ok…rock on olivia!


    • Olivia
      Apr 02, 2011 @ 02:23:50

      Thanks Brian! I hope the transition is over soon.. I’ll get to see what’s up in store for me!
      Thank you so much for your wishes.. Hugs xx


  11. G-Man
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 09:38:17

    I can tell that lots of thought and work went into this piece of YOU!
    Loved your 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


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  13. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 01, 2011 @ 00:24:25

    Amen, gilrie! Loved how you lined the beauties/ the words/ one after another and created a poem! Hugs!


    • Olivia
      Apr 01, 2011 @ 00:26:58

      geee.. thanks Bubble Beauty!
      The pattern is based on the one I wrote sometime back- Idolized. I don’t know if it has a name. But I love the compact presentation it takes..

      Thank you so much for your wishes..
      Bear Hugs right back at ya girl.


  14. Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
    Mar 31, 2011 @ 20:46:04

    Amen!! πŸ™‚


  15. booguloo
    Mar 31, 2011 @ 07:39:49

    Well done capturing chaos and it’s moments.


  16. ladynimue
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 21:51:09

    You know howe much i feel close to your writings .. to the feelings with which you write .. Love them all dearie !!

    Hugs !!!!


    • Olivia
      Mar 31, 2011 @ 01:29:36

      Thank you Nimue sweetheart..

      I hope you know how much better it becomes when you are passionate about your own self! Sharing “my mind” perhaps makes it more connecting.. πŸ™‚
      Thank you so much for being so kind.. Some bear hugs back at ya girl.. xxx


  17. ayala
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 18:18:24

    Soulful life-Pursuing passionately -I like it .


  18. Uncle Tree
    Mar 30, 2011 @ 17:20:09

    Exactly, Olivia! πŸ™‚
    we all have a song to sing – a song that’s all our own.
    Being a particle and all, you should know how to belt it out. Yes?


    • Olivia
      Mar 30, 2011 @ 17:52:56

      Wow.. UT, it’s an honor to read you here! Coming over right away to read you.. πŸ™‚
      Thank you so much for stopping by.. Hugs x


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