Hypnotized

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Countless hours drift by,
Leaving Me dreaming:
Of a lovely evening;
Making me sigh.

I’ve been left-
Spun in a spell,
Whirling in a Careless dance;
All worries bereft!!

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49 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Steve Isaak
    Apr 11, 2011 @ 09:53:21

    Mood-intensive/-effective work.

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  3. Jingle
    Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:30:18

    your words vibrate…

    cool 160.
    🙂
    Happy Sunday.

    Reply

  4. Rachel
    Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:23:11

    It feels light and free and happy. Nice!

    Reply

  5. Alice Audrey
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 23:52:38

    That’s a really nice way to be, though it can be vulnerable.

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  6. Monkey Man
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 20:28:53

    I love those euphoric feelings. Thanks for sharing yours with the Sunday 160 bunch. Hope your happiness continues.

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  7. brian
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 16:58:28

    smiles. sounds like a dream i might want to stay in for a while, letting the worries take care of them selves…

    Reply

  8. jinksy
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 16:07:49

    Love the idea, but the last two lines lack a little in their sense/grammar.

    Where Carelessness dance;
    All worries bereft!

    The word count would remain if they read

    Where Carlessness dances.
    of worries bereft!

    and the words then make better sense. I do hope you don’t mind my explaining? It’s meant kindly! 🙂

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    • Olivia
      Apr 10, 2011 @ 17:11:23

      That’s a big one!
      Thank you Jinksy!! Not at all taken otherwise.

      The idea was to work with the rhyme- the tense’s been taken care of!

      Sunday Hugs xox

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  9. Amropali
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 14:58:24

    Damn! I was in the same mood yesterday night. I was telling monkey man, That his picture of the moon was exactly what I had in mind.
    😀
    I like it.

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  10. Jamie Dedes
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 04:39:13

    🙂 Back again!

    Reply

  11. Luke Prater
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 01:26:37

    nice piece Olivia

    Luke x

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  12. Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 00:02:45

    you never disappoint,

    keep rocking…
    🙂

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  13. lolamouse
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 20:59:14

    beautiful flow to these words. I know what you mean about hours just drifting by while being in a trance. happens to me too!

    Reply

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  15. Madeleine Begun Kane
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 14:08:02

    That flows so beautifully!

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  16. Explorations in Sacred Space
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 12:52:24

    Such a gentle flow of words, Olivia. Well done.

    Jamie
    Musing by Moonlight
    Into the Bardo

    Reply

    • Olivia
      Apr 06, 2011 @ 13:52:15

      Thank you Jamie!!

      Glad this is how it reads.. this is about how “sleepy” I feel most of the my time now-a-days! I am happy that words themselves are inducing the effect.. 😀
      Many Hugs xx

      Reply

  17. Rachel
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 10:14:16

    Worries are overrated… I vote for tea!

    Reply

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  19. Mama Zen
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:59:52

    Lovely!

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  20. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:32:27

    You always choose such sweet images Liv, all sparkling and shiny for the soul! Hypnotized in a dance … that reminds me of something!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:43:09

      lolssss
      silly memories! They tap on our minds exactly when we don’t need them!

      Thanks for stopping by!! To me, “still” images are like a halt; dead end. These glittery n animated ones are as if live images.. paradox!
      Keep dreaming.. Hugs xx

      Reply

  21. ayala
    Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:22:55

    Dreamy……pretty image….

    Reply

  22. Jingle
    Apr 05, 2011 @ 19:22:22

    floating /stunning imagery.

    love it.
    🙂

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  23. KRM
    Apr 05, 2011 @ 18:26:48

    Your dreamy words inspired me to write this morning. Thank you!

    Reply

  24. Dakshi
    Apr 05, 2011 @ 17:00:38

    wonderful..
    Thanx for visiting my blog…

    Reply

  25. tinkerbelle86
    Apr 05, 2011 @ 13:36:51

    this is a gorgeous post!! love the image

    Reply

  26. Nimue
    Apr 05, 2011 @ 01:23:40

    this was refreshing !!
    I love such dreamy lines 🙂

    Reply

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