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Countless hours drift by,
Leaving Me dreaming:
Of a lovely evening;
Making me sigh.
I’ve been left-
Spun in a spell,
Whirling in a Careless dance;
All worries bereft!!
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Hypnotized
05 Apr 2011 49 Comments
in My Biopic Log, My mind Tags: Life, My Experiences, My Life, My Thoughts, Thoughts, Verses etc., Women, Writing
Olivia's In- Mind Whirls.. 
Apr 11, 2011 @ 09:53:21
Mood-intensive/-effective work.
Apr 11, 2011 @ 10:52:11
Thank you Steve! Hugs xx
Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:30:18
your words vibrate…
cool 160.
🙂
Happy Sunday.
Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:49:07
Thank you.. 😀
Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:23:11
It feels light and free and happy. Nice!
Apr 11, 2011 @ 00:48:52
Thanks Rachel.. 🙂
Apr 10, 2011 @ 23:52:38
That’s a really nice way to be, though it can be vulnerable.
Apr 10, 2011 @ 23:55:07
Thank you for stopping by Alice.. 🙂
Sunday Hugs xox
Apr 10, 2011 @ 20:28:53
I love those euphoric feelings. Thanks for sharing yours with the Sunday 160 bunch. Hope your happiness continues.
Apr 10, 2011 @ 20:46:56
Thank you MM! It’s fun to play with Sunday 160.. 🙂
Apr 10, 2011 @ 16:58:28
smiles. sounds like a dream i might want to stay in for a while, letting the worries take care of them selves…
Apr 10, 2011 @ 17:05:44
Glad you felt so.. please do! Amongst all the running around, it won’t be bad to stop for a moment or two.. 😀
Sunday Hugs x
Apr 10, 2011 @ 16:07:49
Love the idea, but the last two lines lack a little in their sense/grammar.
Where Carelessness dance;
All worries bereft!
The word count would remain if they read
Where Carlessness dances.
of worries bereft!
and the words then make better sense. I do hope you don’t mind my explaining? It’s meant kindly! 🙂
Apr 10, 2011 @ 17:11:23
That’s a big one!
Thank you Jinksy!! Not at all taken otherwise.
The idea was to work with the rhyme- the tense’s been taken care of!
Sunday Hugs xox
Apr 10, 2011 @ 14:58:24
Damn! I was in the same mood yesterday night. I was telling monkey man, That his picture of the moon was exactly what I had in mind.
😀
I like it.
Apr 10, 2011 @ 15:34:10
Yeah, I read you comment.. 🙂
Glad you like it!! Hugs xx
Apr 08, 2011 @ 04:39:13
🙂 Back again!
Apr 08, 2011 @ 09:57:59
Glad and so pleased. Honored.. 😀
Apr 08, 2011 @ 01:26:37
nice piece Olivia
Luke x
Apr 08, 2011 @ 01:37:17
Thank you Luke
Hugs xx
Apr 08, 2011 @ 00:02:45
you never disappoint,
keep rocking…
🙂
Apr 10, 2011 @ 15:57:15
Thank you Dear!!
Hugs x
Apr 06, 2011 @ 20:59:14
beautiful flow to these words. I know what you mean about hours just drifting by while being in a trance. happens to me too!
Apr 06, 2011 @ 21:20:42
Wonderful!!
Thank you so much for liking it! Appreciate.. 😀
Apr 06, 2011 @ 14:08:02
That flows so beautifully!
Apr 06, 2011 @ 14:45:21
geeee.. thanks Maddy.. 🙂
Sending you some long scapes of sleep.. 😀
Apr 06, 2011 @ 12:52:24
Such a gentle flow of words, Olivia. Well done.
Jamie
Musing by Moonlight
Into the Bardo
Apr 06, 2011 @ 13:52:15
Thank you Jamie!!
Glad this is how it reads.. this is about how “sleepy” I feel most of the my time now-a-days! I am happy that words themselves are inducing the effect.. 😀
Many Hugs xx
Apr 06, 2011 @ 10:14:16
Worries are overrated… I vote for tea!
Apr 06, 2011 @ 19:06:21
lolss I know what you mean.. time to snooze..zzzz
Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:59:52
Lovely!
Apr 06, 2011 @ 01:00:52
Thank you.. 🙂 Hugs xx
Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:32:27
You always choose such sweet images Liv, all sparkling and shiny for the soul! Hypnotized in a dance … that reminds me of something!
Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:43:09
lolssss
silly memories! They tap on our minds exactly when we don’t need them!
Thanks for stopping by!! To me, “still” images are like a halt; dead end. These glittery n animated ones are as if live images.. paradox!
Keep dreaming.. Hugs xx
Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:22:55
Dreamy……pretty image….
Apr 06, 2011 @ 00:38:20
Thank you!!
Apr 05, 2011 @ 19:22:22
floating /stunning imagery.
love it.
🙂
Apr 05, 2011 @ 19:49:21
Thank you Ji.. 😀
Apr 05, 2011 @ 18:26:48
Your dreamy words inspired me to write this morning. Thank you!
Apr 05, 2011 @ 18:58:45
ooohhh! Much honored KRM!
Hugs xx
Apr 05, 2011 @ 17:00:38
wonderful..
Thanx for visiting my blog…
Apr 05, 2011 @ 17:10:19
Thank you n very welcome.. 🙂
Apr 05, 2011 @ 13:36:51
this is a gorgeous post!! love the image
Apr 05, 2011 @ 17:10:34
Thank you so much.. 🙂
Hugs xx
Apr 05, 2011 @ 01:23:40
this was refreshing !!
I love such dreamy lines 🙂
Apr 05, 2011 @ 01:28:06
Thank you Dear Friend.. I have been feeling sleepy off-late! Dedicated to my laziness.. 🙂