Images those my eyes had clicked-
Hang upon my mind still..
Building yet another dimension;
For me to float and wonder.

Thousand words these speak-
Suspending countless episodes;
Spinning a whole new Galaxy,
For me to re- discover!

Pouring out the sentiments,
Choking dead my laughter;
Creating another hysteria-
For me to break and cry.


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42 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Life: Between the lines
    Apr 11, 2011 @ 03:17:53

    visions, memories o! woven stories but they sure don’t divulge a whole lot, sometimes we fill in the blanks don’t you think?
    I enjoyed this, it was light, fun and thought provoking πŸ™‚


    • Olivia
      Apr 11, 2011 @ 06:20:04

      Yes.. I kept it sketched out instead of colored! Only an overview sort of.. πŸ™‚
      The ones around it are all connected.. if read those; it may sound lighter but only sound.. πŸ˜€

      Hugs x


  2. jinksy
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 18:09:53

    That image floats and wonders, that’s for sure…


  3. Alice Audrey
    Apr 10, 2011 @ 04:51:53

    I can see them now, images piling up like photos.


  4. joanny
    Apr 09, 2011 @ 12:17:07

    Beautiful and inspirational – it seems throughout life we have moments where we pause and then reinvent ourselves and go forward.



    • Olivia
      Apr 09, 2011 @ 13:21:50

      Quite true Joanny!
      As I always say, life is a travel. With each milestone reached, a new trek/beginning follows.. Thank you for stopping by Dear One

      Many Hugs xox


  5. lolamouse
    Apr 09, 2011 @ 07:32:47

    “Choking dead my laughter…” that’s really a powerful image. Your poems always convey such strong emotions. Very ethereal this one. Nice.


    • Olivia
      Apr 09, 2011 @ 13:27:25

      Thank you!
      I am feeling every move n change in n around me like mega slide-overs! Words is all I have to share my emotions n feelings for now.. πŸ™‚

      Mega Hugs x


  6. Jannie Funster
    Apr 09, 2011 @ 02:16:39

    It’s hard to stop watching that moving image, almost as captivating as your words.

    Many galaxies do exist for discovery. All is not what it seems.

    Love alone reigns.



  7. Claudia
    Apr 09, 2011 @ 00:15:46

    ..Spinning a whole new Galaxy…sounds really good


  8. mona
    Apr 09, 2011 @ 00:11:32

    images can grow and grow in your mind, thousands of them! Love your writing!


  9. Mama Zen
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 22:59:21

    Well done!


  10. Eric
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 22:27:07

    Keep moving forward and things will follow.

    Nice 55, Olivia!


  11. Monkey Man
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 22:07:19

    Even to ourselves we cannot be objective. Well stated.


  12. G-Man
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 18:46:39

    Stop a minute…Take a Deep Breath….Proceed.
    You’ve done well My Child.
    Excellent 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


  13. izzy
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 18:17:32

    Float and wonder- evocative! and I really love the sparkly image! Thanks.


  14. brian
    Apr 08, 2011 @ 02:29:10

    scrolling through that inner film real can be tough depending on the images that stream…nice capture olivia!


    • Olivia
      Apr 08, 2011 @ 09:59:14

      Yes Brian.. again all about my current phase- transition. I always believed that travel is greater than reaching the destination.. now “living” my own words.. πŸ™„
      Thank you for appreciating it! Hugs x


  15. Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike)
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 11:07:24

    Soft yet firm in the emotions.. Your expression on images those my eyes clicked… that started and fine-tuned all senses to get ready and flow with your words..

    A prefect start, take, expression and ending for this write on vision… A+++

    *thumbs up* and *HUUUUGGGG*


    • Olivia
      Apr 07, 2011 @ 16:57:55

      Thank you Ting!! Someone who has been there can appreciate it. No wonder you are able to read it beyond the written words.. Thank you so much for being around..
      Many Hugs xoxox


  16. Rachel
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 09:26:52

    Truly beautiful and utterly desolate. Lovely!


  17. Jamie Dedes
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 09:24:44

    Well done, Olivia. This is perfectly lovely. And what an illustration.

    You will have to tell me what you think of networked blogs.

    Hugs! xoxox


  18. ayala
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 04:02:28

    Re-discovering good-crying -not good-image great! πŸ™‚


  19. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 02:43:54

    Re-discovering- YES! Crying- NO! The image is again killer!


  20. irisdeurmyer
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 01:25:21

    Wow Olivia, your poems are always ethereal and lovely.


  21. cloakedmonk
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 00:17:14

    Hello, dear one! I love the idea of re-discovering something new.


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