Cheers!

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Submitted for Magpie Tales

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Submitted for Sunday 160

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56 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bodhirose
    Apr 18, 2011 @ 01:12:27

    Great job–great 160–and great topic of independence! Hooray for Olivia! xoxo

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    • Olivia
      Apr 18, 2011 @ 01:26:32

      hehehehe.. I knew it! You would read beyond those written words ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank you for your wishes. The purple skull had been missing you bad- lolss

      Many Hugs xoxoxox

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  2. Monkey Man
    Apr 17, 2011 @ 23:28:32

    Love the graphic treatments within which you flow your prose. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  3. Polly (5th Sister)
    Apr 17, 2011 @ 19:15:25

    Done bleeding…time for healing. Nice.

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  4. Vinay
    Apr 17, 2011 @ 12:25:40

    shape poetry and so visually appealing! Olly with a delicious Magpie. liked it!

    My Magpie Post

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  5. Trellissimo
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 23:53:43

    Very clever graphics…

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  6. brian
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 03:50:36

    love the conviction…who wants to be a blood sacrifice for someone any way…like the concrete too!

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  7. hypercryptical
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 01:06:08

    Excellently crafted!

    Anna :o]

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  8. versebender
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 22:33:44

    I agree…this is very creative and clever…well done. Vb

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  9. Helena
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 18:37:50

    Hey! Hey! This is a fabulous post. Creativity at it’s very best. I’m well impressed!

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  10. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 16:16:08

    Ha! That was the best shape poem I’ve ever seen. One of those bloody drinks for me please! You amaze me every time I come here girlie! Hugs!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 13, 2011 @ 18:46:19

      Goblet full of hugs right back at ya- girl!! hahaha.. all of my poems talk about my transitional phase and the moron I am dealing with,, wink!
      Many hugs again xox

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  11. Marilyn
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 14:05:11

    Wow! Very clear words, very clever layout. Excellent.

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  12. Tumblewords
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 09:57:41

    Very creative!

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  13. Reflections
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 09:55:35

    Love the symmetry of form, duplicated on either side. Wonderful imagery within the words as well.

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  14. lolamouse
    Apr 13, 2011 @ 01:03:55

    You go girl! Roll on!

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  15. jinksy
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 22:36:53

    An elegant empty glass, if ever I saw one! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. gautami tripathy
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 22:03:34

    Love this!

    physics of it all

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  17. The Reason You Come
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 20:23:12

    What a nice, shapely poem! ๐Ÿ˜‰ That’s right, you should be the one to set the ball rolling, girl. Don’t let anyone (any man) tell you otherwise!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 12, 2011 @ 20:46:58

      Yes! You have said it!!
      Missed you all this time.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Glad to see you back in action! Hope things are good at your end..!

      Sending you many Hugs xox

      Reply

  18. Sampada
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 17:59:20

    Nice shape-poem,loved the style…

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  19. Lyn
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 17:50:58

    All of it just shakes me up..perfection in concept and execution!

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  20. Jim Swindle
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 17:23:29

    Quite creative.

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  21. Isabel Doyle
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 14:57:39

    pretty spikey

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  22. Krislin, Ting (S.Pike)
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 10:11:55

    Wow, this is deep… from the glass… *thumbs up* another excellent piece you have wrote… ๐Ÿ™‚ *HUG*

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    • Olivia
      Apr 12, 2011 @ 11:25:19

      Thank you Ting! It may be a metaphor if I say this is my present tense.. however, it’s nothing short of this either!!
      You are a sweet darling.. ๐Ÿ˜€ Hugs xx

      Reply

  23. priya
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 08:14:47

    Loved it!

    What an innovative take on the prompt! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  24. The Fool
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 07:28:12

    Wow! Brilliant shape poetry.

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  25. Jingle
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 07:03:16

    wow..

    super shape.
    you rocked.

    ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  26. Mama Zen
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 06:15:39

    How clever!

    Reply

  27. thingy
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 04:55:58

    What a fabulous tale. A little scary, too. : )

    Reply

  28. Anthony North
    Apr 12, 2011 @ 02:50:41

    Nicely done, and visually clever.

    Reply

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