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Posted for Friday Flash 55

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41 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Life: Between the lines
    Apr 18, 2011 @ 07:01:20

    So much anger? πŸ™‚
    The juxtaposition of such a pretty format and the words!!! I LOVE πŸ™‚
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/youre-my-reason/

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  2. Sheila Moore
    Apr 17, 2011 @ 07:49:32

    Love the concrete heart and the fancy font. Nice visual poem.

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  3. frayedges
    Apr 17, 2011 @ 00:58:37

    Hi Olivia! I hope you are great. I haven’t been writing as much, so I haven’t been around as much. Cheers!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 17, 2011 @ 01:19:40

      wow Lisa.. you came to get me here- loads of love lady!!!
      I am doing just fine after crawling down a transition and crawling up a change.. πŸ™‚

      Cheers for your wishes!!
      hugs xxx

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  4. Amropali
    Apr 16, 2011 @ 10:22:32

    I think all of us have this feeling in our lives.

    The post looks very pretty.very creative!

    have an awesome weekend.

    xoxoxoxo

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  5. Amropali
    Apr 16, 2011 @ 10:22:11

    I think all of us have this feeling in our lives.

    The post looks very pretty.very creative!

    have an awesome weekend.

    xoxoxox

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  6. Steve Isaak
    Apr 16, 2011 @ 05:27:14

    Good, emotive work. Strong stuff.

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  7. Talon
    Apr 16, 2011 @ 00:42:36

    It’s painful to pull someone off the pedestal, but how much easier it is to look someone in the eye and speak the truth when you’re on the same level.

    Have a beautiful weekend, Olivia.

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    • Olivia
      Apr 16, 2011 @ 00:54:52

      Gosh!! you made my Saturday Talon!!

      I agree with what you’ve said- very much indeed.. πŸ™‚
      Wishing you a nice weekend as well xx

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  8. Monkey Man
    Apr 16, 2011 @ 00:18:56

    Sometimes the mere expression in a forum like this helps the cleansing and letting go process.

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  9. Margaret
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 23:45:43

    They are only on a pedestal if they change diapers, clean toilets and do dishes… πŸ™‚

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  10. Alice Audrey
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 22:51:47

    You make me grateful for an old boyfriend who let me learn the hard way that we weren’t suited.

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    • Olivia
      Apr 15, 2011 @ 23:15:49

      lolsss
      This guy happens to be my 1st ever crush really!! Secretly I still may be in love with him.. but in actuals, given a chance I would love to play around a bit.. shhhh
      xx

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  11. G-Man
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 20:30:47

    Olivia…
    Your honesty and heartfelt posts are so refreshing to read.
    Moving 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your wonderful support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End…Galen

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  12. brian
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 16:28:30

    it is dangerous juju when we put anyone on a pedestal, they rarely live up to it…a busted marriage…ugh…i really like concrete heart…

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  13. Anthony North
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 15:12:51

    The pain has to go eventually.

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  14. meirozavian
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 09:32:48

    Letting go pain ….
    Nice and lovely.

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  15. ayala
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 04:08:44

    So sorry for your sadness 😦 smile πŸ™‚

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  17. Andy
    Apr 15, 2011 @ 00:04:45

    My dear Olivia,
    I love how you created this one. You are very talented.

    Yet again, you have shown your inner strength in gradually letting go of past pain & hurt. Although none of us know what lies ahead, I think you are taking a BIG step in the right direction.
    I sincerely applaud your courage.
    May your footsteps be guided to pleasant places.

    Best wishes always,
    Andy

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    • Olivia
      Apr 15, 2011 @ 01:10:16

      Dear Andy,

      Thank you so much for appreciating this! I have let go of just so many things.. this one took the longest time- but I moved on eventually!
      I am surprised how you guessed; but yes, I have taken a step already towards something that I guess would become my Destiny. I am all set to create one.. yet again!

      Thank you so much for your wishes.. need all of that!
      Many hugs
      xoxox

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  18. Jingle
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 21:57:50

    super creative and beautiful…

    πŸ™‚

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  19. ladynimue
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 20:30:29

    Do i really have to tell you how much these words mean to me ??
    Sadly am not yet ready to take him off the pedastal !

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  20. cloakedmonk
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 10:21:40

    It is really a great movement to taking him off the pedestal. That’s moving forward.

    *hugs*

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    • Olivia
      Apr 14, 2011 @ 13:15:28

      Thank you Dear one..! Had he taken charge of things; it would have been different- if not much.. or maybe worse.. sigh!
      Hugging hugs right back at you.. xxx

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  21. Broken Sparkles
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 01:12:01

    I’m sorry for the sad emotions dear Liv. You know time heals it all … Hugs!

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    • Olivia
      Apr 14, 2011 @ 01:27:29

      You are a Darling..!
      The only thing that works for me is passionate persuasion.. success gives me a high.. so…….

      Many Hugs xoxox

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  22. Krislin, Ting (S.Pike)
    Apr 14, 2011 @ 00:38:11

    the ‘heart-shaped’ in it is creative… and those words, they made my eyes misted…

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