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Olivia's In- Mind Whirls.. 
May 23, 2011 @ 19:53:05
amazing…
keep it up.
May 23, 2011 @ 20:59:23
Thank you.. 😀 xx
May 23, 2011 @ 19:09:50
what a great shape! very cool
May 23, 2011 @ 20:59:40
Hey Thank you Jess.. xx
May 23, 2011 @ 13:39:02
one of my favorites! ♥
May 23, 2011 @ 14:27:58
Thank you 🙂
May 22, 2011 @ 07:36:18
Such a powerful and pain-filled poem, Olivia. Sail away in that lovely sailboat and leave it all behind.
May 23, 2011 @ 21:02:38
Thank you Patti for your kind words n wishes.. Steps already taken.. now time would determine the count of distance traveled..!
Many Hugs xox
May 22, 2011 @ 07:29:53
terribly clever 55… well crafted ~
May 23, 2011 @ 21:05:30
Thank you! You are no less.. 😀 xox
May 21, 2011 @ 06:28:57
very playful and creative,
bless you,
amazing 55.
May 23, 2011 @ 21:06:00
Thank you.. 🙂
May 21, 2011 @ 04:07:02
Always such visual appeal mixed with emotional prose.
May 23, 2011 @ 21:06:19
hehehe.. Thank you MM!! Hugs xx
May 20, 2011 @ 16:17:40
lovely once again olivia…great concrete image…i used to sail every summer…i wish you all the best olivia
May 23, 2011 @ 21:06:55
Guess what- it’s summer here.. 🙂
Thank you for your wishes.. xox
May 20, 2011 @ 12:29:50
Breath taking stunning !
and breath holding sad .
May 23, 2011 @ 21:07:26
woah! That’s one helluva comment.. 🙂 xx
May 18, 2011 @ 18:39:42
Beautifully paining the eyes, keep up the literary and artistic works! 🙂
May 18, 2011 @ 19:38:49
Thank you a big bunch Clariice.. 🙂
Hugs a million xox
May 18, 2011 @ 08:37:02
The poem and its layout convey beauty, even during uncertain times. Very nice!
May 18, 2011 @ 17:40:23
Thank you so much Judith- that is encouraging enough.. 🙂
Hugs xox
May 17, 2011 @ 13:51:38
What a treat from a true artist! Sail on my dear and wave goodbye to those pains. It will be an exciting journey 🙂
May 18, 2011 @ 17:41:02
woah! That’s a big one.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
Many hugs xox
May 17, 2011 @ 09:27:37
So very clever in presentation and delicious in delivery. You’re always one of my favs!
May 18, 2011 @ 17:41:39
Thank you Henry! That is indeed so generous of you.. sending you many hugs xox
May 17, 2011 @ 05:48:13
Excellent way to present the poem. Also the poem is great. Kudos to best of both!
May 18, 2011 @ 17:42:06
Thank you so much 🙂 xox
May 17, 2011 @ 03:32:15
Like any other phase, all I can say is, this too shall pass…
But the fact remains that your creativity is absolutely LIMITLESS!! A fantastic piece of work, my dear…
You really ARE a wonder of wonders.. for reasons more than one!
May 18, 2011 @ 17:44:55
Thank you My Dear.. clinging on in hope!
Now.. now.. I am gloating already! I am trying to dig my memory whatever I used to do in my growing up years.. All the stuff here is a part of it 🙂
Okay, now I am high.. (without feeling warm- like you do with Vodka 🙂 )
You have been both kind n generous with your words to me!
Many Thanks n (not so) warm- (‘coz it’s summer) hugs xoxox
May 16, 2011 @ 23:02:02
I love the layout to chose for this poem. Just lovely.
May 18, 2011 @ 17:45:09
Thank you Nicole.. xoxox
May 16, 2011 @ 18:29:58
A poem in a picture. Beautiful originality. My potluck: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/protect/
May 18, 2011 @ 17:46:09
Thank you so much indeed! xxx
May 16, 2011 @ 18:19:41
Yes, a good one, Olivia. Nice layout, and the message of moving on comes through clearly. Well done!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/dark-eyes/
May 18, 2011 @ 17:47:27
wow Jess- Thank you! I am glad it strikes out so evident.. 🙂
Many Hugs xox
May 16, 2011 @ 17:24:34
Creativity personified! Sadness can indeed be a great muse if channelled into a poem.” Move on like the gone times, never to turn around”–profound lines indeed!
May 18, 2011 @ 17:48:13
You said it Dear!
Often I do my best when stressed or depressed.. 🙂
Many things going on in mind n life both..
Hugs xox
May 11, 2011 @ 08:02:49
Awesome poem. Amazing how you can create such a powerful poem AND fit it into a shape to match the imagery of the poem itself.
May 11, 2011 @ 13:01:23
lolss!
Reading such a nice comment is just so humbling! While doing such stuff, something possesses me n ride over my conscience till I am done.
When I look back at my work after some time, I feel surprised myself.
Thank you so much for your support.. 😀
Hugs xox
May 10, 2011 @ 23:59:40
never before have i read a poem like this on a image…cool idea …must try one:))
May 11, 2011 @ 00:18:50
Thank you Pushpee.. 🙂
Do try and send me a ping so I too feel delighted reading you.. xoxox
May 09, 2011 @ 16:50:21
…to sail away, leaving the pain behind….
Such a beautiful poem Olivia,
…wishing you a cozy day, hoping that the mood from the poem is only fictional….
May 09, 2011 @ 19:44:31
Thank you so much for your wishes Dear!!!
Here, it’s the real mood.. 🙂
Going through a transitional phase and hence the feelings expressed.. But am otherwise chirpy- 😀
Hugs xox
May 09, 2011 @ 14:56:40
Awesome post .Creative approach depicting an image like the pains will be washed away and you still keep sailing away on your journey 🙂
May 09, 2011 @ 15:14:21
Thank you Dear One.. 🙂 Hugs xox
May 09, 2011 @ 14:54:57
Awesome post ..creative..like the pains are washed and you keep sailing away 🙂
May 13, 2011 @ 13:27:55
Thank you Uma.. 🙂 So much appreciated..!! xox
May 09, 2011 @ 07:14:52
Facade created of shining stones bedazzling the onlooker’s eye – piqued my imagination!
May 09, 2011 @ 11:11:32
Thank you dear.. wishing you a nice week ahead.. xox
May 08, 2011 @ 00:45:36
love the sailboat image you create
Sail away from the pain
hugs
May 08, 2011 @ 00:47:59
Thank you Leslie! Definitely on the sail.. hugs right back at ya.. 😀 xox
May 07, 2011 @ 21:22:39
I, too, would like to abandon pain. It is, quite simply, no fun!
A wonder weaving of words.
Thank you.
May 08, 2011 @ 00:21:22
Thank you Darling……. I have become numb after taking all that I have. Whenever some feelings return, I write. Other times, I brood.
Many many hugs xoxox
May 07, 2011 @ 10:52:18
I love how you weave a double tale all in one poem, wonderful creative artistic expression. You are a fabulous artist.
joanny
May 07, 2011 @ 12:09:36
Thank you Joanny!
You are one helluva sweetheart.. supporting n encouraging.. 🙂
Many Hugs xox
May 07, 2011 @ 06:46:25
“Riches to rags.” I like that.
May 07, 2011 @ 14:50:49
Thanks MZ! xx
May 07, 2011 @ 03:32:30
I am sorry to hear that you are in pain… I hope it’s only a stage, a creative one. I suppose you didn’t get my second and third messages via fbk. Maybe you can read this one. I hope you understand that I cannot tell a lot about that case without strong evidence. Take care.
May 13, 2011 @ 13:31:04
Hey Bella! This is indeed a phase but in reality.. I may be making it productive (creative) but a phase it is!
Thank you for our wishes.. many hugs xox
May 07, 2011 @ 00:27:03
Cool!!
May 07, 2011 @ 14:51:28
🙂