"It's all in my mind"
26 May 2011 28 Comments
in My Biopic Log, My mind
Tags: Fighting Back, Life, My Experiences, My Life, My Thoughts, Poems, Poetry, Shape poem, Shape Poetry, Struggle, Thoughts, Verses etc., Women, Writing
Submitted for Sunday 160
Previous Uncelebrated Diva Next (Quint)-Essence-ial
Jun 01, 2011 @ 07:25:33
It takes a lot of strength and courage to walk that path, especially shunning old norms. Good for you. I like your concrete form too. Neat!
Jun 01, 2011 @ 14:13:12
Thank you Katherine.. 🙂 It indeed gets tough most of the times but my inner self is at peace with the changes I made.. hugs xxx
May 30, 2011 @ 00:44:01
the vitality of the poem drives it forward. an urgent lifeforce within the mind. nice! 🙂
May 30, 2011 @ 19:04:00
Thank you so much for stopping by.. why, you observed the essence very closely.. 🙂
Glad you did.. hugs xx
May 29, 2011 @ 23:16:23
Your declaration of independence coming through loud and clear again, Olivia.
I hear you!!
Hugs and love…
May 30, 2011 @ 01:14:09
Thank you Gayle.. glad you stopped by here..
Thank you so much for your wishes.. hugs xox
May 29, 2011 @ 23:00:58
Quite powerful to be able to claim your identity as something YOU decide, define, feel and live. In a word, empowerment. Kudo’s to you!
Here’s mine: The Visit
May 31, 2011 @ 14:39:47
Thank you.. Once again, this one is also my life story.. 🙂
May 29, 2011 @ 22:57:59
Labels serve us no purpose. To renounce what you list is to free yourself. Thanks for stopping by the Sunday 160.
May 31, 2011 @ 14:39:12
Yes MM, very right.. 🙂
May 29, 2011 @ 22:43:45
May 31, 2011 @ 14:38:56
Thank you.. 🙂
May 29, 2011 @ 16:24:36
ah glad dead poet made that ref as i thought the same…wouldnt it be nice if we could, at times…that is why they put crabs in a bucket together, when one tries to escape another pulls it back…nice concrete too….
May 29, 2011 @ 16:30:24
Thank you Brian..
About crabs.. we have this little joke saying it all..
A train full of crabs was halted on its way. All of those had escaped in sometime excepting the Indian crabs. They had kept pulling each other down by the leg.. ouchh!!
May 27, 2011 @ 20:46:53
I like the way that you placed one word line upon line. This added to the poem’s depth. It made it felt like every item you placed there became heavier and heavier until the poet freed herself. Very interesting.
May 27, 2011 @ 21:29:13
woah! Thank you for watching it up close..
You really went deep into it to discover the essence!! Indeed that’s how I had done it.. to hold it all till the last line.. Weekend hugs xoxox
May 27, 2011 @ 19:18:32
This is outstanding, Olivia! I really enjoyed it.
May 28, 2011 @ 23:41:05
Thank you MZ.. 😀 xx
May 27, 2011 @ 12:21:25
Good one! It made me think of the movie “Into the Wild”, he also renounces society and finds his identity. I am in love with the idea of renouncing society, maybe someday 🙂
May 27, 2011 @ 12:30:22
Thank heavens you liked the idea.. I have almost.. now live on my own terms n conditions. Tough but worthwhile!
After I changed my name, become atheist and left my dad’s name (including dropping the surname legally); things have turned around…
The major part of the society still takes pride in lifting stones on me.. but then.. that’s all they can do.. They live in the cavemen era. They are bound to hunt, beautiful things catch their fancy- winkie!
May 27, 2011 @ 01:50:07
Personally, I think we should change our name at least once a year. It freshens the spirit and opens up endless possibilities.
May 27, 2011 @ 12:18:46
If only the legality was easy.. I am comfortable with the name mom chose for me.. only I couldn’t use that while she was still around.. hope she is watching over..
Thank you Dear xox
May 26, 2011 @ 03:06:34
Ummmmm and Hmmmm …Ok then!
May 26, 2011 @ 11:00:27
May 26, 2011 @ 00:37:59
There’s a lot to renounce out there!
May 26, 2011 @ 00:49:49
🙂 Thank you for stopping by Dear One.. 🙂
May 26, 2011 @ 00:12:22
May 26, 2011 @ 00:15:41
Thank you Dear One!!
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