Phlebotomized Matrimony

~*~*~

~*~*~

The shape poem is Vermilion Box. The Betel Leaves are held by the bride to cover her face. The presentation of the poem is according to the Hindu Bengali Wedding! Red/Sindoor/Kumkum is considered to be the color of wedded women.

This poem is about my afflicted relationship with my ex; how it had become immediately after the wedding!

~*~*~

Submitted for Friday Flash 55

~*~*~

Advertisements

24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. deadpoet88
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 19:09:44

    Very honest and painful poem. Well written, you’ve expressed your feelings very well. It is sad that so many relationships become like that, and the best thing to do is to get out of it fast.
    wonderful honest piece!

    Reply

    • Olivia
      Jun 13, 2011 @ 15:09:40

      Thank you:
      1) For appreciating it
      2) For supporting me
      Although it wasn’t fast as how I am usually; I did get out of it.. Thank you again.. xoxoxox

      Reply

  2. izzy
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 19:01:53

    mirages- the shimmer and shift- good analogy! thanks.

    Reply

  3. Monkey Man
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 03:34:00

    We can never forget our past, but we can run away from it screaming – 😉

    Reply

  4. Steve Isaak
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 03:08:05

    Once again, creative presentation, good writing.

    Reply

  5. glitteringsootonhereyelashes
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 01:46:46

    i love the depth and honestly of this piece. heartfelt and beautiful. and i agree with Kavita: the phrasing is rather spectacular!! 🙂 xx

    Reply

  6. ChefKar
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 01:29:26

    There is freedom in being vulnerable and baring your raw soul. Powerful Olivia. I respect you for speaking your truth. May your new days be blessed with happiness and serenity. hugs. karis.

    Here’s my 55: Friday Flash 55 ~ Repeat Echo

    Reply

    • Olivia
      Jun 13, 2011 @ 15:04:33

      Hey Thank you!
      I know what you mean.. yes, till the time I am not enslaved; I am happy.. of course there are risks! But who’s scared? Bring it on.. xoxox

      Reply

  7. Kavita
    Jun 11, 2011 @ 00:32:24

    Your choice of words was most moving, Olivia! Game me the jitters, I must say!
    Many a relationship has seen and lived in this superficiality… and sometimes, they go on forever!
    In an odd sorta way, I am glad you opted out of it soon enough…
    Like they say, better late than never! No?

    HUGEEEEE A/Ced hugs to you, girl!!!

    Reply

    • Olivia
      Jun 11, 2011 @ 00:47:08

      Thank you my partner in you know “witch” crime..!
      indeed only the ones who know a little about it would be able to place it or ones who know me up close.. Infact, after writing the words, they automatically took the shape of a vermilion box! When I read again; it seemed to befit! Hauntingly uncanny.. then again.. the past remnants of that mishap do comes back at times to growl back at times.
      Hopefully would be out of the realm soon!

      Thank yo again My Dear.. Many more Hugs right back at you.. xoxoxox

      Reply

  8. G-Man
    Jun 10, 2011 @ 18:43:26

    Olivia Dear….
    I’m so sorry that you have this pain.
    You deserve to be pain free.
    Always love coming here.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

    Reply

  9. brian
    Jun 10, 2011 @ 16:10:28

    so you are equating this to marriage? ha. may some good yet find you, smiles.

    Reply

  10. Belinda
    Jun 10, 2011 @ 15:49:18

    No married person I know has ever said marriage is easy. A heavy 55 that packs a punch.

    Reply

  11. Rachel
    Jun 09, 2011 @ 21:40:32

    That feels almost desperate. Remember, mirages are never to be trusted…

    Reply

  12. Daydreamertoo
    Jun 09, 2011 @ 06:40:51

    Raw, honest and very good in its imagery!

    Reply

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

http://twitter.com/ReadOlivia

My In- Mind Whirls Writes

free counters
%d bloggers like this: