14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Heaven
    Jun 26, 2011 @ 16:00:28

    Good for you to get over him….. Very creative with the visuals (I love pictures with words).


  2. ChefKar
    Jun 17, 2011 @ 23:28:54

    You sound very cleansed in your 55 from September ~ I hope the rainfalls since have further washed away the pain.

    Here’s mine:Daytime Mask


  3. G-Man
    Jun 17, 2011 @ 18:49:58

    Olivia…did you mean to link up a September post?


  4. Baishali
    Jun 17, 2011 @ 17:20:41

    beautiful … with a heady sense of liberation … loved it.


  5. Mama Zen
    Jun 17, 2011 @ 03:51:51

    Pretty intense!


  6. Daydreamertoo
    Jun 16, 2011 @ 15:35:47

    Awwwww, very sad, powerful prose.


  7. Kavita
    Jun 16, 2011 @ 00:07:27

    really liked the internal rhymes here… added a lot of weight to the poem…
    very well written, girl!!

    and oh yea, cheers to that ‘me’ space… πŸ™‚



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