A slice of Love



Submitted for Sunday 160



29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Heaven
    Jun 26, 2011 @ 15:57:05

    What a visual delight… so lovely to meet you~


  2. Reflections
    Jun 20, 2011 @ 20:27:08

    A fun piece served up with grace… kind of painstaking tho in the end, being forked over and all.


  3. eclipseofthemoon
    Jun 20, 2011 @ 18:34:13

    Getting forked…funny, sad, creative….great one Olivia


  4. Jingle
    Jun 20, 2011 @ 01:26:21

    beautiful delivery of your message.
    Bless your Sunday.


  5. Bodhirose
    Jun 20, 2011 @ 00:55:45

    Perfect–I love this, Olivia. What a great metaphor!

    Love and hugs,


  6. Alice Audrey
    Jun 20, 2011 @ 00:04:15

    Seriously, some guys just aren’t worth it.


  7. Monkey Man
    Jun 19, 2011 @ 22:34:36

    Not sure whether to be sympathetic or hungry….thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.


  8. Talon
    Jun 19, 2011 @ 22:10:42

    There’s few things worse than being forked over. I love the image with the words, Olivia. It was brilliant! Hope you’re having a fabulous weekend. xx


    • Olivia
      Jun 19, 2011 @ 22:14:31

      Yeah right. No one would want to get forked- over and over again!
      Thanks a big bunch Talon!
      The weekend almost over here (SULK).. Housework gulped all of the hours.. Sulk again!
      hugs xox


  9. brian
    Jun 19, 2011 @ 16:12:37

    getting forked is not a lot of fun….well presented olivia


  10. Steve Isaak
    Jun 19, 2011 @ 13:31:58

    Perfect, theme-tight work, until the end-line, which feels superfluous – disconnected. Either way, excellent stuff.


  11. Katherine
    Jun 19, 2011 @ 08:58:24

    Really like the presentation of this. You are all about the look of your poems. Cool.

    And as for him? Let him disappear from dreamland. He doesn’t deserve to be in your dreams!


    • Olivia
      Jun 19, 2011 @ 10:55:28

      Yeah you are right! That’s one thing I have not been able to deal with.. those dreams making me go back in time- making me sad for the rest of the day!
      Thank you for stopping by.. I try to experiment with the presentation; glad you liked it!

      Sunday hugs xox


  12. Daydreamertoo
    Jun 18, 2011 @ 18:03:45

    Youch! Very strong and…. cutting


  13. ALIVE aLwaYs
    Jun 18, 2011 @ 12:07:14

    wow, nice poem and wonderful way of presenting it. Just lovely!


  14. Broken Sparkles
    Jun 18, 2011 @ 11:22:51

    Very creative Twilight!


  15. Other Mary
    Jun 18, 2011 @ 05:12:34

    Awww…saddish, but good metaphor Olivia.


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