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  1. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    Sep 24, 2011 @ 00:24:29

    this is fabulous..

    you have a way with words, the art taste is rare and astonishing.


  2. jannie funster
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 03:45:32

    Olivia, my Dearest… I like that line about storms in mind have a purpose too. I can relate. What seems so terrible is actually a lesson to enlighten us.

    So great to see all your purple again. I have missed you!!



    • Olivia
      Sep 24, 2012 @ 00:45:29

      I too have missed you… an year old comment here! Life had caught me in another storm, a lesson learnt, a life led! Sigh… wait, I will come to catch you soon!
      Hugs xoxoxo


  3. Chris G.
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 21:06:52

    The pen…it does open so much opportunity for expression, doesn’t it? Words – oh, the beauty of words…


  4. henryclemmons
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 10:01:42

    Silence given voice. The sounds it can make. Very nice.



  5. Sarah Johnston
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 08:33:30

    Wow chilling to have a devil inside of you claiming to have found a better place to be in that one is spooky but a great poem


  6. Lori McClure (@lorimcspeaks)
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 07:46:54

    Hope you find that brighter place 🙂


  7. johnallenrichter
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 07:36:42

    Writing poetry is my release to,o it takes away all the other things, solitude being one. And Olivia, we all live in solitude, Your poem speaks to me of a beautiful young person who has discovered herself….. “found a direction” … and I’m convinced you found the right direction……. I love emotions and what you have written here is entirely that…… Very well written and a joy to read…….


    • Olivia
      Oct 03, 2012 @ 17:51:30

      Thank you John. Your words are but blessings in disguise… I need loads! Indeed I have wandered in solitude. I am still in there but now foloowing a trail. Let’s just see…
      Hugs xoxoxo


  8. ayala
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 06:41:09

    my silence found expression….good to have your words to comfort you!


  9. brian
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 04:24:34

    the storms in our mind do hold a purpose…propelling us to the next…that it would lead you to creation is a powerful thing…


  10. Pat Hatt
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 02:13:26

    Always nice when silence can find expression and be truly appreciated, nice verse!


  11. Daydreamertoo
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 02:03:12

    Awww good to see you expanding your life and your world. Lovely!


  12. edpilolla
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 01:30:24

    storms in mind have a purpose, indeed. really like the title to this grand poem.


  13. Broken Sparkles
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 11:13:39

    I like the expression of your words crying for you … creative and unique!


  14. davidstrachan611
    Aug 23, 2011 @ 03:10:58

    that picture of the chair in front of water that moves – that seems to move – how do you do that? Hypnotic to watch it. Thanks!


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