Submitted for Friday Flash 55



24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Margaret
    Sep 05, 2011 @ 09:54:14

    Out with the old relationships and worries. Just enjoy and take one day at a time. I hope this works out the way you want it to. 🙂


  2. Jannie Funster
    Sep 04, 2011 @ 00:14:59

    Olivia — if ever you were to be reshuffled it would only reconfigure an already lovely soul, a brand new Olivia combination of AWESOME!!



  3. The Cello Strings
    Sep 03, 2011 @ 21:12:09

    sad, powerful 55.

    bless you.


  4. Lydia
    Sep 03, 2011 @ 13:50:51

    Oh dear, there is angst here. Shows the confusion of some relationships. Well done.


  5. Dr.FTSE
    Sep 03, 2011 @ 11:43:58

    Nicely rebuilt! Thank you


  6. Monkey Man
    Sep 03, 2011 @ 04:30:44



  7. G-Man
    Sep 02, 2011 @ 20:03:37

    Please tell me this ain’t happening again!!!
    Are there any decent free thinking men In India?
    I know there is, find him!
    Loved your 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


    • Olivia
      Sep 04, 2011 @ 13:28:13

      Well, the relationship has become so intense that I had to sketch a few possible outcomes.. I am sitting stuffed up watching out for whatever hits me!!

      Hugs xo


  8. Alice Audrey
    Sep 02, 2011 @ 19:33:31

    Not a happy relationship.


  9. moondustwriter
    Sep 02, 2011 @ 19:23:27

    Olivia – I am enjoying your work. This piece has symbolism and inner depth that makes me want to know more
    Thanks for your visit


    • Olivia
      Sep 04, 2011 @ 13:32:16

      Thank you Leslie!!
      A simple or maybe not so actually relationship struck me and like a lightning.. this is all about that.. Have been writing all about that lately..

      Many hugs xoxox


  10. Heaven
    Sep 02, 2011 @ 18:33:14

    sad haunting note towards the end….


  11. izzy
    Sep 02, 2011 @ 18:10:50

    Geez that looks like mercury ! reflective… – thanks-


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