Vengeance

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Cannibals of screams;
some haunted chases later,
I found myself buried deep within!
Moving the corpses soaked in blood aside,
I noticed I was rotting too..
The deads have fallen
tired of hovering;
scaring my soul away to hell!
Killing fresh beasts,
heaping this universe;
now, I will rule the cemetery.
People, here I come…

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Linked for Friday Flash 55

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20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ayala
    May 10, 2012 @ 22:33:27

    Dark and powerful!

    Reply

  2. gardenlilie
    May 10, 2012 @ 09:08:53

    Dark and scary. So people gets used in the end. Thanks.

    Reply

  3. hedgewitch
    May 10, 2012 @ 08:02:44

    This is nice and creepy. Good to see you at dVerse, Olivia.

    Reply

  4. claudia
    May 09, 2012 @ 20:56:16

    shivers..this was quite tight and dark…

    Reply

  5. Helen
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 23:17:11

    We will … we will … rock you! Loved the energy and strength in this.

    Reply

  6. brian miller
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 20:21:54

    eeepp….like your darkness olivia…wow been forever it seems since i was over here….

    Reply

  7. Doctor FTSE
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 19:19:57

    Stephen King, eat yer heart out! Great chiller.

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  8. Broken Sparkles
    Feb 11, 2012 @ 13:52:18

    Honey, that’s pretty, pretty dark! I’d rather have you ruling the smiles in life!

    Reply

  9. Kavita
    Feb 10, 2012 @ 00:10:56

    Soooooper Daaaark! Super creepy, super scary…but super cool!
    Those screams gave me a chill! Brrr….

    Reply

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