Initial Thought
book-frame stands bedside
with you and me on both sides
stark togetherness.
glasses of our drinks
reflects the merry within
happy together
wonderful times those
blissful episodes of love
invokes countless smiles
tear trickles on frame
stains glass over our faces
cry smudges laughter
forlorn memories
of times of togetherness
stabs me often and again
Second Version
book-frame stands bedside
with you and me on both sides
burning autumn gold
glasses of our drinks
reflects the merry within
cherry trees on full bloom
wonderful times those
blissful episodes of love
chirping birds around
tear trickles on frame
stains glass over our faces
dense forest of snow
forlorn memories
of times of togetherness
wandering in dark
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Olivia's In- Mind Whirls.. 
Sep 29, 2012 @ 18:11:10
You know you are a brilliant wordsmith! Need I say more? 😉
Sep 29, 2012 @ 18:45:32
Man!!! I see you weaving words now 😉
Thank ya xoxo
Sep 29, 2012 @ 19:25:21
🙂
Sep 29, 2012 @ 19:47:56
😀
Sep 27, 2012 @ 08:57:32
I really liked the first version… then I read the second. It’s hard to say better or best… that doesn’t really apply. But if you forced me to pick one… I’d say the second… it was a smoother ride a gentler tide a cool hand luke… nicely done
Sep 28, 2012 @ 12:42:31
Thank you Serena! My 1st ever take on Haiku and what do I know…
Hugs xoxo
Sep 27, 2012 @ 02:00:13
I love you gave us both versions. I admit to enjoying the nature references very much in the second version. Beautifully done.
Sep 27, 2012 @ 02:01:32
Thank you Anna! Glad you liked it… You could say I was on the roll… 😀
Hugs xoxo
Sep 26, 2012 @ 18:17:01
Wonderful, Olivia! You’ve done a fantastic job with this…especially love the finish of the final set in the second version. Bravo!
Sep 27, 2012 @ 00:13:20
Thank you Tash… glad you enjoyed it! This one’s my 1st ever take on haiku. Hugs xoxo
Sep 26, 2012 @ 04:13:37
i like the first one the best…it is intense as those feelings are as well….when those moments have passed….
Sep 27, 2012 @ 00:08:07
Yeah right Brian… did the second one just to blend it with the nature sorta. The 1st one was my 1st take on Haiku!
Hugs xoxo
Sep 26, 2012 @ 00:45:08
wonderful!!
Sep 28, 2012 @ 12:42:48
Thank you Mohana… hugs xoxo
Sep 10, 2012 @ 21:53:16
awesome Haiku girl love the 4th Haiku in the second version so sweet
Sep 10, 2012 @ 22:00:29
Thank you so much dear… was so apprehensive, cause this is my 1st time 🙂 hugs xoxo