for more raindrops clicks


Gathering pride in streaming down,
Descending dissolute; fountain-fall
directing the dust wandering bewildered,
scattering flights, scooting them homeward…

but just before those trickled to spill,
I caught those young twinkling with glee.
Brilliant white, shone drop-stones;
raindrops, those that didn’t.



14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jigme Tenzin
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 12:37:11

    nice! and yeah lovely


  2. Hema
    Nov 17, 2012 @ 11:06:56

    Wow..thats so well written!


  3. Bristo Jiu
    Nov 14, 2012 @ 21:03:12

    charming and romantic verse…
    Happy Thanksgiving.



  4. brian miller
    Sep 13, 2012 @ 03:01:48

    smiles…great verse olivia, made me smile and great to see you as well…was nice last month to see your entry into the contest as well…hope you are well…


    • Olivia
      Sep 13, 2012 @ 09:57:28

      hehehehe thanks Brian 🙂
      I just shuffled whatever I had, wish did some to fit it better. Sending loadsa smiles right back at ya

      hugs xoxo


  5. G-Man
    Sep 13, 2012 @ 01:54:19

    Dearest Olivia…
    It’s so good to see you back at Mr. Knowitalls
    Ya know….Friday Flash 55 is rockin every week
    I’d LOVE to see you there….G


    • Olivia
      Sep 13, 2012 @ 01:58:06

      Thank you my dear awesome G-man… I saw that and was thrilled to say the least. Yippie, will be stalking more often from now on…. Hugs xoxoxo


  6. Sam373
    Sep 11, 2012 @ 01:06:44

    I like this thought.


  7. Kavita
    Sep 10, 2012 @ 01:30:28

    Always the looked up to…


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