Identity of I


I introspect I – a painting by Neerajj Mittra


To create my I,
I break within;
I destroy all that is I.

To know my I,
I look within;
I seek to unlearn that is in I.When all is gone
what’s left within
is the hollow skeleton of I.If not of you,
if not with them,
then, who and what am I?

Linked for Friday Flash 55

8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. brian miller
    Dec 01, 2012 @ 18:06:54

    I seek to unlearn that is in I….great line…and there is def wisdom in your owrds olivia….smiles….how have you been?


  2. Margaret
    Dec 01, 2012 @ 10:36:23

    Wowzers! This is too deep for me – I guess you are empty. Ha. JK. I would never, ever make it in a psychology class.


  3. G-Man
    Dec 01, 2012 @ 07:10:16

    Boy Olivia….
    That was an intricatly written piece of work
    I loved your introspective 55
    Welcome back to the Friday Funfest, I always miss you when you play hookie
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


    • Olivia
      May 15, 2014 @ 16:38:24

      hey! You’ve been on my mind since long… I am soooo sorry was entangles within and even otherwise. Will hop over soon mate. Hugs xx


  4. cloudia
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 02:12:39

    Deeply wise, friend!

    Appy Aloha Wishes!
    from Honolulu
    Comfort Spiral

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