The Rediscovered Me


I looked at the marigolds-
Appreciated their Beauty.
“We’ve been here since a week..”
They hissed back at me!!

Shifting my guilty focus-
I looked in to the mirror next to those
Pretty for my years and age!
“I look beautiful”- the looking glass smiled..

I switched on the incandescent bulb,
That smoothened a few wrinkles on my eyes skin-
I wondered- was it my Vodka..?
“Silly, it is the new Me”- sang my high!!



17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Fenny
    Dec 12, 2010 @ 19:36:47

    Love your work and especially this one!


  2. Jingle
    Dec 09, 2010 @ 07:08:46

    romantic and elegant..
    magical writing.
    keep it up.


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  4. trisha
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 20:58:46

    Just love this new side of yours. its fabulous. embrace it and let it stay with you forever.


  5. Someone Is Special
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 20:33:25

    awesome olivia.. so cute you know..

    –Someone is Special–


  6. Kellie Elmore
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 18:47:16

    i was reading your comment in reply to Kavita and I just love that this was from a moment you had and penned of it so beautifully. Intimate and real. Your writes always make me smile. Thanks. 🙂


  7. megzone
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 15:48:20

    i wonder why was i missing out on so much :O :O
    duh!!!: 🙄
    stupid me 😳


    • Olivia
      Dec 08, 2010 @ 19:57:44

      aaaaw- hugs…. xx
      So sweet of you Megz.. Writing has really re- created me.. So this time round, my life not only gave me the much awaited opportunities, but also let me grab those- and hence this one.. 🙂


  8. Scent of my heart
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 01:38:30

    I like your latest poems, hope I sense. Beautiful!


    • Olivia
      Dec 08, 2010 @ 08:46:15

      Yes my Blaga Bubble- this was how it had happened in the evening- so I thought that I might as well put it in words and embellish it with glitter image.. 🙂
      Thanks sweetheart- Love xoxox


  9. Kavita
    Dec 08, 2010 @ 00:26:45

    Ohhhhh.. lovely!! Very nicely stated, lady! Me is soooooooo happy for you! 😀
    Mirrors show the truth.. and if you see the glow, then you just need to gloat over it!!


    • Olivia
      Dec 08, 2010 @ 00:46:33

      Wowie Kavz.. no sooner I post it and you come flying to imprint around your words.. 🙂
      This is what had happened in the evening. While moving around my gaze from the flowers to the mirror, and then to my drink, I had it almost ready.. This is exactly how I had felt in those few minutes..

      Yeah, the mirror seems to be happy looking at me!! 😉
      Love xoxox


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