A Day, its Death; n its screaming whispers..
Spelled my liberation from the Chains of a bonding..!
Nothing short of a complete mess-
A snappy end to an abrupt beginning.
This cloud too had diamante sparkles;
Glowing my way, making me shine..
Yet again- One more time..!!
..
Olivia's In- Mind Whirls.. 
Jan 07, 2011 @ 15:45:28
It’s sad when you have to burn bridges. But then again, if a friendship doesn’t offer you anything good anymore, then it has to end. It’s unfortunate, but, as your poem says, liberating!
Mar 10, 2011 @ 18:05:29
You are so right!!
That’s exactly what has happened- n I’m glad it happened 🙂
Jan 06, 2011 @ 15:26:38
great job olivia.. mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/
Jan 05, 2011 @ 21:25:30
Sometimes you just have to let go, and you will be reborn, like the transformation of a caterpillar to a butterfly.
Jan 05, 2011 @ 22:41:02
Yessss.. Quite agree with you.. I am blessed that I learnt about it well in time- not much was lost..
Hugs xx
Jan 05, 2011 @ 10:56:48
Each friendship lost only brings you closer to the desires of your heart. Patience, my dear, for love hears your sighs carried by the night breeze, and if you please, brings an answer when it returns. Happy new friendships!
Jan 04, 2011 @ 15:22:11
My first exposure to this kind of poem…. what a lovely form.
I wonder why the friendship had to end so quickly.
Thanks.
Jan 04, 2011 @ 18:42:55
The balancing curve.. steep rise, sudden fall..!!
I am not trained in poetry- just scribble whatever hits my mind- Thank you for your supporting words.. 🙂
Love xox
Jan 04, 2011 @ 12:30:26
very powerful dear, friendship … how many times I’ve been burned by friendship … keep having faith in life and smile, always smile!
Jan 04, 2011 @ 18:41:56
You said it sweetheart..
It feels better that it was around the same time that I received your gift.. That had kept me going!
Surprisingly, I am not yet damned- I may not trust everyone and do not anyways- yet, am still very open..
You have made me like that small curious girl who wants to talk to everyone..
Mwaaaah.. You are my sweet bun, the prettiest Bubble B.. 🙂 Do you imagine a nerd yapping it all in your mind- that’s me.. lolsss
I am smiling……
Jan 04, 2011 @ 02:48:55
The image is beautiful as are the words, so well woven.
I am grateful I found you via this week’s poet rally.
Jan 03, 2011 @ 17:08:10
friendship is so often talked about in a light happy way. we all seem to block out those times when it isn’t so perfect, when we cry and hurt inside because of friendship. wonderful writing!
Jan 03, 2011 @ 23:12:43
You are right Pony Girl. We don’t often talk about those to keep up the pretense..
Thanks for stopping by Dear One xoxox
Jan 03, 2011 @ 09:36:56
that last line really brings it home….Liberation!!! very powerful! as always Olivia I’m glad I stopped by I find that I look for your name on the list every time it’s rally time!!! happy new year my dear friend!
Jan 03, 2011 @ 23:08:30
aaaw.. you are so sweet Dear One.. 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind words.. Love your stopping by at my site
Mega Hugs xx
Jan 03, 2011 @ 02:31:27
Very beautiful 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
Jan 03, 2011 @ 23:13:02
Thank you Dear.. 🙂 xx
Jan 02, 2011 @ 18:27:19
Only you can do this Olivia. I can see you tearing through your shackles, cutting away to freedom.
Always expressed with your powerful verse. I love truth!
Jan 02, 2011 @ 16:50:27
Kindred Spirits write true and feel what other dare not. So much with so few words! Speak one day of “PERFECTION”.
Jan 02, 2011 @ 07:25:37
Time to say goodbye I guess, some can say it so easily…
Happy rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/02/roaring-tiger/
Jan 02, 2011 @ 00:31:25
Interesting write on friendship
Jan 01, 2011 @ 17:45:20
Friendship is such an abstractly defined term.Wonderful description:)
Jan 01, 2011 @ 07:01:24
Love the idea that friendship can be like chains! The secret is to recognise that fact!
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:04:24
Thank you Gemma Dear.. 🙂 xx
Jan 01, 2011 @ 02:03:40
I celebrate your liberation with you Olivia! Yay! Hoorah! Wonderful poem, my friend.
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:06:53
Thank you Dear Gayle.. 🙂 I learnt a lot deal from you too.. so cheers to you as well.. 🙂
Love My Dear xxx
Jan 01, 2011 @ 22:58:23
Many thanks, Oliva. I wish all good things for you in your life. 🙂 xoxo
Jan 01, 2011 @ 01:27:09
I’ve had such a day.
I like this.
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:16:30
aaaw!! Mega Hugs- xoxox
Thanks for stopping by Dear
Dec 31, 2010 @ 22:22:57
A succinct write, one that sometimes is far harder to do than just to continue….
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:18:16
You so said it.. then again, I fail to understand why I had kept ignoring the signs.. nevermind..
Love xox
Dec 31, 2010 @ 06:29:58
beautiful….
well illustrated message,
Happy Thursday.
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:24:20
Thank you My Dear..
Love n Hugs xxx
Dec 31, 2010 @ 01:08:03
How often we hang on to relationships that need to be released. It is important to let go to make room for a new friendship, aka, lesson! It takes courage to say an honest “goodbye” rather than making excuses or, worse disappearing. Lots to think about in your poem…..as always. Thanks! pat
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:27:01
Dear Pat,
Thank you My Dear.. I am blessed to have found you.. I am still learning!!
Love n Hugs n Smiles xxx
Dec 30, 2010 @ 21:29:57
I too have had ‘friendships’ that needed an ending to give their meaning potency in my life.
well done!
Jan 01, 2011 @ 16:02:06
Moreover, It wasn’t one.. only looked like one.. Looks can be deceiving.. 🙂
Love xx
Dec 30, 2010 @ 18:32:10
This felt haunting to me. I hate endings like that when the beginning was also quick. The poem was powerful to me. Thank you.
Dec 30, 2010 @ 19:48:33
Yeah.. I experienced it. one of those times wherein I had not been judgemental..!!
Thank you for your kind words.. 🙂
Dec 30, 2010 @ 17:20:47
Beautiful poem…
liberation from friendship – then the friendship might be a weight on your shoulder…You seem to be happy to shed the weight..
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Dec 30, 2010 @ 19:50:43
Yes Rashmi,
Only that I didn’t realize. You know I welcomed the change as a child- only to realize later that I had made a mistake. Anytime I create an exception, this is how I am “taught”.. Apparently, it would have become weighty.. not anymore.. 🙂
Love xx
Dec 30, 2010 @ 14:58:10
Chains of a friendship, that is food for thought. Good poem! 🙂
Dec 30, 2010 @ 19:51:42
This is how it becomes Ina whenever I don’t brood about things before doing them.. My mistake of being so child- like.. 🙂
Wishing you a very Happy New Year..
Love xx
Dec 30, 2010 @ 08:53:51
“Liberation from the chains of friendship” like this, waiting for the link 🙂
http://words4afriend.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/a-place/
Dec 30, 2010 @ 19:52:34
🙂
Sure would do that soon.. taking time so while writing, I don’t miss out on anything.. 🙂
Love xox
Dec 28, 2010 @ 13:46:38
very touching poem and cute pic.
Dec 29, 2010 @ 11:10:14
Thank you Trisha Dear,
Something just happened a couple of days back. Have not yet written the details of it; once I do, I’ll link it with this one..
Love xox
Dec 28, 2010 @ 00:02:12
“It spelled my liberation from the Chains of a friendship..!”
Loved this line..
beautiful work and a cute picture.. 🙂
Dec 29, 2010 @ 22:53:58
Thank you Sumit.. I only tried to express how only one day could bring about such a major one!!
Love xox